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J'adore. Your fiction is so captivant and well-written, I wanted to participate and resolve the case! I had a great time reading your story, so thank you for sharing it.

I really liked this story. Though I could guess that the killer had to be someone from the hospital I really did enjoy your story.

I'm stopping here quick because I have a bone to pick.

Harry shouldn't have just let the immediate distrust that Draco showed slide, I mean yeah he showed disappointment but he KNEW why they had to put it off and he was confused about the nausea and the collapsing.

I don't think he should have let that slide, I'd have stewed on that for a bit longer. Oh, it makes me so mad! Blind accusations against him shouldn't make him be softer towards Draco yet, even if it was out of panic.

That said...

Keep Up The Good Work~!

Add more sex

I just reading the second chapter 2 fist 11 of the chapter and I already know who is doing the killings .. A doctor ,( healer) for pregnant people (maybe especially for male pregnancy)
And as I scroll down to write the review I see that harry is pregnant and goes to a healer his name..Thomsen... (Or something like that)
That's the guy. The tomsen guy. He's the serial killer.
P.s just going to keep on reading to discover why he kill the prego guys. I know that he Thinks its unnatural for a guy to give birth to a baby. But want to know if that the only reason.
I predicted that the doctor is either going to be a halfblood or a muggleborn .

Let's see if I was right in my predictions.

well, how stupid can one be? He is an auror, he should know better

I love this story. I thought in might need a bit more... of something I just don't know what. BUT at the same time I felt that this was one of the most interesting stories yet.

has anyone thought to ask about their doctors? it could be their doctors people!

This was one of THE BEST Drarry stories I have ever read. TEN OUT OF FIVE STARS, and I'm not even joking! The plotline was amazing, and I hope you never stop writing, because your stories are some of the best. And please, you did a GREAT job of ending the fanfic; don't you dare apologize for writing too little, too much, or something that isn't good enough, because no matter what you do - at the VERY LEAST, in my eyes - your writing will always be amazing.

I love your story very much for that Harry and Draco and scorpius and teddy as a 's so for my poor grammar,my english is not well enough, but I just want to convey my preference and thanks for your hardworking~

It was a very good read brilliantly written. I enjoyed it so very much.

You are such a brilliant writer. So much talent!

Getting fantastic good can't wait for more

great story. i love your stories.