| Reviews for Rain |
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   ajani's apprentice chapter 1 . 1/3/2018 This was adorable and I love it so much. A sweet bit of modern Robin/Lucina. |
| Stryker Gryphus chapter 1 . 12/5/2015 I know this is late but dude, THEM FEELS |
| Daraen-dragmire chapter 1 . 10/14/2015 nice story hope your gonna continue to write it |
| The Apocryphal One chapter 1 . 9/29/2015 Awww. A very nice story with a nice premise to how Robin and Lucina would meet again if he never came back at the end of Awakening. Good job! |
| Firudo Saki chapter 1 . 7/24/2015 EEKK! *fangirls* finally a story on how Robin and Lucinda met after awakening I like story's when he come back later but I always wanted to see something like this I love this story can't wait to read more |
| chaosalien chapter 1 . 7/22/2015 I just wanted to say good job! :) I was looking for a robin lucina story that is based in the modern time! :D I hope you get pased that writers block |
| FrodoFighter chapter 1 . 7/20/2015 one or two mistakes with the spelling, but overall a nice story. I liked the scene when Lucina looked into the mirror a lot |
| Gunlord500 chapter 1 . 7/20/2015 This was very nice! :D |
| DefogYap The Writer chapter 1 . 7/19/2015 I really like to see a continuation of this, maybe a reunion between the two of them. I really love the Description, emotion of characters and dialogue from start to end. It was funny, interesting and touching. Would love to see you write another good story again. Good luck |
| Sangheilix chapter 1 . 7/19/2015 A nice little read. Only saw one noticeable grammar mistake, it's when Robin says, "Hey, you don't so hot, ma'am." I'm guessing you meant "you don't look so hot". Other than that it was worded pretty well. Now, you say you don't want to start a multi-chapter fic, but I have to ask, will there be more chapters to this? I'd read it. Keep up the good work! |
| stfukid chapter 1 . 7/19/2015 The romance felt a little bit too rushed, but hey, it's still a good fic. |
| gokart48 chapter 1 . 7/19/2015 Lol, Sumia you are the best. I just can't help but laugh with how eager she is sometimes. It's just so funny, and it cracks me up every time. Minus two or three spellings mistakes, the story was really sweet and I see how you left it open ended in case you ever wanted to add on to it. Lucina seemed a bit more shy and disoriented than normal, but still a good version all the same. Robin should also probably stay away from showing a girl military or medical techniques as well XD But hey, as long as they get together than I don't care about how. Sweet and funny all the same. Well done. |
