Reviews for The Case Brings Out The Truth |
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charli911 chapter 3 . 3/9/2018 Another great start to a story...hope you write more soon! |
OneChicagoPD chapter 3 . 8/3/2017 I LOVED THAT SO SO SO MUCH! so much depth |
Guest chapter 3 . 6/17/2017 This is a really good book keep updating |
madl.pati chapter 3 . 4/19/2016 Oh my good. That's so cute |
Guest chapter 3 . 10/16/2015 Amazing story! I wonder what the team and Ziva will say and or do with Tony next. Please write more stories with Tony like this one. |
lilyflower101 chapter 3 . 10/16/2015 Tony really is good with kids. |
DS2010 chapter 3 . 10/16/2015 Loved Tony's interactions with Henry |
lmill123 chapter 3 . 10/16/2015 I love this story so far and am looking forward to your next update. You have to wonder just why Gibbs nor Ducky ever figured out Tony was abused as a child. If you think about the rules Senior enforced on Tony as a small child, that in itself is very telling that Tony was being abused in some form or mannor. |
tammy henson chapter 2 . 9/30/2015 please please update soon |
Cathy Brown chapter 2 . 9/20/2015 Ooh, that would be scary. I grew up with family that didn't let me cry, but nowadays, if they tell me not to cry, I tell them that I'm going to cry, because their words are cruel, and they hurt me. My problem is that I wonder if my family ever wanted me in the first place, so I can relate to Tony DiNozzo a lot. |
Cathy Brown chapter 1 . 9/20/2015 I hate when kids are abused myself. What if the little boy sees his daddy in the interrogation, and gets scared? |
Catalina Leigh chapter 2 . 8/27/2015 There are some grammar/spelling errors, and it's moving a little fast. But you've got a great plot going. Maybe slow it down and work on the structure a little. I am looking forward to seeing where this goes though. |
Guest chapter 2 . 8/10/2015 Really sweet moments and chapter. Please update or continue your story soon! |
earthdragon chapter 2 . 7/24/2015 Very good story so far, although you really need to work on your use of words. For instance, you said "defiantly" when you should have said "definitely" (defiantly has a completely different meaning - it means disobediently or cheekily). "He hit you to" should read "He hit you too" and "Your safe" should be "You're safe" (an abbreviation of You are). You have a good imagination and the story is fairly well written with good punctuation, but I suggest you get someone (a friend, parent) to proof read it, as a spell checker isn't fool-proof, as it doesn't highlight when a wrong word has been used. |
Guest chapter 2 . 7/24/2015 Good chapter. Look forward to the next. By the way, it's "definitely", not "defiantly". |