I read a sequel this was a great story.

That was quick and out of character. Love and passion? Did she really say that? I was thinking a couple chapters ago that Edward should just give her the books to read. I’m glad he mentioned them at least.
This was a chapter of blurting out facts with no conversation.

I was wondering what they were gonna do about the nomads.

Huh... speeding things up quite a bit. The mitosis lab was only a week after Bella arrived in the books. She now showed up early so we are no where near the girls choice dance (you said prom), the van incident or the lab.

No mention of the nomads, Tyler’s van or the men who go after her when she looks for the book store. I would think the nomads would be brought up by now since not playing baseball might not cut it.

They have all been training for the last fifty years. What is two weeks gonna do? They want to train then they should get something that smells like Bella. Maybe they can find something that still has her sent on it from her bedroom.

I have read a couple of these stories and I do hate when they drag out reading the books. I like that you didn’t drag it out but I would have liked it more if there was some discussion after every book. There should have been some shock in the beginning about her being human. I was waiting for Rosalie to chime in and Edward to be having second thoughts after the first book.

just realized that if harry didn't die that not only sue and charlie wouldn't be together but leah and seth won't shift...

but now it means that harry clearwater won't die and sue and charlie won't be together

I was recently just rereading this and love that a thousand years is one of the songs since it was quite literally written for Edward and Bella (I didn’t comment nor realize this before rereading it now lol)

Hi. Really like the story. Though there is quite a lot of mistakes. Especially in this one. Like it was Monday when they went to school and suddenly he took care of her the whole weekend. And she had to stay home till Wednesday. It’s really confusing, but I feel that if the mistakes and spelling errors are fixed then this could be an awesome story.

I'm really really disappointed in Alice and Rosalie in this chapter. They should not have made Bella go somewhere that she was uncomfortable with. Bella should really have told them no and told the guy to not be on her like that instead of just going along with it so as not to hurt their feelings. Especially since they didn't seem to really care about hers.

You need to hit complete. LOVED IT! Thank you so much for sharing your talent with us. Perfect as is.

omg yes please do a sequel and if fhe voltori come what will tanya , Kate , Garett , Carmen , Eleazar and Irina's reactions to this be. Please do a sequel.

This is the second time I'm reading this please continue the story