I look forward to seeing where this goes

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This got a whole ton more complicated...

He made it! He made it!

Now Kakashi’s the one constantly getting kidnaped. (Also, I forgot to say this before, but I love the title!)

This is so exciting!

Please continue. I love this and it's so original.

Oh no...I thought Kajashi was the one who had gotten impaled! Oh no...plw1ass don't let Obito die either...

Oh, no...please don't let Kakashi die...

Ooh, what an interesting premise! I'm really excited to read this!

This story is amazing! Your writing style and the way you protray the characters is fascinsting. I really love your protrayal of Rin. The interesting twist of her being in Madara's hands instead of Obito. I love how he wanted her for her blood ties with the Senju and not the Uchiha. (because, honestly, I can see it. What with her looks (never really gave it much thought until now) and the fact she is such a great healer).

Her relationship with the Zetsu is both priceless and cute. Shiro is a good name for the nonnamed one. Tobi is priceless! "I would never make the poo go away." lmao! I love how they are helpful, but it's sad it's only for Madara. Still, they were her only company. Becsuse, really, Madara wasn't company at all despite being an actual human. But, can we blame him?

I love how you have Rin admiring Tsunade and using thst as strength to crush the boulder. She could have phased through (and so could Obito if he truly had full access to kamui. Of course, he didn't have mangekyou, but he did slip through, so...) but I'm glad she didn't.

I loved how you protrayed the whole scene with Rin seeing her friends "die". It was an interesting twist. Interesting how it's Kakashi as Isobu's jinchuuriki considering his obvious less chakra levels. Then again, it wasn't made for him keeping it inside. I assume that's why Kushina is helping with his training?

The betrayal hit Rin hard, but Minato got there just in time (ironic how fucking slow he is, given his speed. Then again, these circumstances make it so he can't.) Rin sscrificing her arm for Obito is just a Rin thing.

Poor Bito :'(. So much trauma. It's no wonder he's in a coma. Yay! Orochimaru is going to help! I just adore him! *hearts*

I really enjoy this story. You're a very talented and creative writer. :). I'm sure you are struggling with this story and/or life in general. Trust me, I completely understand. But, if you ever do come back to it, I'll gladly support it :). Thank you for this amazing piece of art!

This is crazy good and well thought out

Everyone's badass, but it's still tragic ;-; You've made me love Rin. Awesome role reversal.

Kyaa~! The differences such a simple shift can cause, neh? Putting their minds into different perspectives...

Oh my goodness this is great. If you ever get the muse again this story would be so lovely to read. Your Rin is great and I'm loving the character dynamics.