This really changed the canon events. I hope you update sometimes and maybe try Hakuren, Kouen, Judar or Hakuryuu’s POV

I just realized that all the POVs shown, other than Gyokumei’s were of people who ended up dying. Is this gonna be a pattern?

update plz i wanna read until the end

Update plz

Update

Please update soon it’s so good so far

Actually, they call them birds in magi even though they look like butterfly. So you are right in a way.

This... This is really amazing. Please continue.

Many diff pov's ... Approved

I can’t believe you just left me hanging like that docnsndnsownd It’d be nice to see how Judar changes because of Gyokumei being such a large part of his life! CNt wait for the next chapter!

This is a really interesting story; Magi isn't something I know particularly well but I feel that you've done a good job of capturing the emotional impact that growing up in such a situation might have on people.
The politics and subterfuge felt extremely well written in how many layers there seem to be with each action taken.
Though the part that I respect the most was how you showed the way that relationships between family members can strain and change over the years.

overall, I think the chapter I enjoyed the most was Hakutoku's due to intricacies involved in his relationship with Gyokuen and the way he interacts with his children.

I look forward to seeing what might happen next.

This looks like fun. I hope to see more chapters in Gyokumei's point of view, but otherwise, what you're written here is a true delight. Poor, poor Gyokumei. XD

My, you're here. I wonder what is going on with Gyokumei...

Guess I'll reread this again.

Hey, thanks for writing this fic. Um, just sayin, but I hope you don't get scared by the misogynists policing female OCs into making your character any less strong and special than you planned her to be! Alibaba, Kouen, Hakuryuu, Sinbad, and them all have canon to be super OP in. This is Gyokumei's story so hope you let her take center stage with hesitation! :)

I am so happy you updated! I can’t wait to see what comes next! Is Gyokumei and Judas close?

At first I was happy to see an update, then excited when it was in Hakuei POV. I thought it would have some family bonding or something...and then Hakuyuu and Hakutoku died and there would be only 9 chapters, too much sadness in ten minutes. Will there be a Kouen’s POV? Or more detail about what happen? Can’t wait to read the next chapter