So touching!

HOT DAMN I'm crying right now such a good story keep it up

the premise of this fic said in the summary sounds interesting as well as the first chapter, so I'm putting this on my list of "probably unhealthily binge read all chapters when it's preferably not midnight"

Snap... You made me cry. Why'd you have to go and make it so sad? It was a great story, though. :')

-PJ

WORDS. WORDS ARE INEFFICIENT FOR WHAT I JUST READ. IT WAS PERFECT, BUT IT ALSO MADE ME CRY. IT WAS PERFECT. JUST PERFECT. THIS IS THE BEST FAN FICTION THAT I HAVE EVER READ. I NEVER WANTED IT TO END, BUT THIS IS VERY BITTERSWEET. AND YES, I AM STILL IN CAPS AND I REFUSE TO COME OFF! IT COULDN'T BE ANY BETTER. 333333333333333333333333 :'):'):'):'):'):'):'):')

But... What... Wait... Did it work? Did it utterly fail? Wha?! *whimpers*

-PJ

Such an emotion-filled chapter. I hope Jack's plan is good.

-PJ

AGAIN. YOU BROKE MY HEART. A-FRIGGIN-FRIGGA-FRITO-GAIN. *sobs hysterically* WHERE'S MY STASH OF CHOCOLATE ICE CREAM?! I can't wait to find out what his idea is, but in the meantime, Imma go cry myself to sleep. Kay... *bawls* :'(:'(:'(:'(:'(:'(:'(:'(:'(:'(:'(:'(:'(:'(:'(:'(:'(:'(:'(:'(:'(:'(:'(:'(

YAY! They forgave each other! But I thought that Jamie already knew...? Probably just me. But I can't wait to see what happens with Elsie! Will she believe, or be skeptical? OOH, I'm so excited! Update soon, please! Love this story!

*scream internally* I love the way you make everything hunky-dory in the first part of any given chapter, and then at the end BAM! problem-that-is-also-cliffhanger. It's infuriatingly stylistic. It keeps readers coming. Bravo.

-PJ

Oh no, you can't just go and kill me inside right after you bring the friends back together! How cruel can you get?! (All authors are, though. It's called building plot. So don't worry, even though it's upsetting, I understand.)

-PJ

Great update, I look forward to seeing if the boys find forgiveness from one another

...ARE YOU TRYING TO TEAR MY HEART TO PIECES?! 'CAUSE IT WORKED! *bawls* You're really bringing out the feels... Now let me go and console myself by eating Ben & Jerry's and watching Merlin.

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY! I CAN NOT STOP SQUEALING AND FREAKING OUT AND ALL OF EVERYTHING! I LOVED THIS CHAPTER SO MUCH I'M GOING TO DIE! PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASE! *fangirls*

HE CAN SEE HIM! I am so freaking happy right now! This chapter was awesome! I don't want you to feel rushed, but I definitely look forward to the next one!

-PJ