Omg loved it! I absolutely crave Geralt whomp and omg this delivered! Thank you!

Nice little story on the notorious, white-haired womanizer! Hopefully with some sequels. ;-)

Really enjoyed it! Well done!

I enjoyed it very much! Nice work for a first, you've captured the characters perfectly, even I could imagine their voices in the dialogue. For a second there, I almost thought this was going to be tragic.

I so love Yen and Geralt. I've read the books too. They're perfect, and Yen is a little bit more communicative and motherly to Cirilla in the books. There are fan translations of them all over the web if you like! Thank you for writing this, it bothers me that there are so little fics about these two. I will ship them forever. Yen might be cold, but based on the books she was willing to endure torture for Ciri, kill herself to save Geralt, and even saved a pregnant woman. She is a mysterious woman at that and I like it.

Finally! Another Yen and Geralt fan fic! Thanks for the new story, so far so good and I can't wait to read the rest!

*Clap clap* very good sir. Maybe a pinch of romance could have been added to perfect it but good work.

Love it!
Your writing was good, you do a good job with action scenes.
We could really use some more Yeralt stories on this site.
Keep it up!
-C

hmm heh damned fine luck there.

coulda stood to be a bit longer but all in all it was quite nice.

hope you write more.

hmm... well that was fast... heh but nice.

you have potential. this is put together very well indeed, I like it.

hmm interesting.