| Reviews for Kira vs the Black Organisation (PART 1) |
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   yaoiyeetslut chapter 9 . 8/16 I am not saying this story is bad, no i love it it's amazing. the only thing tripping me off is light. like first of all, it seemed like he is falling in love with aoko. and that's not light. light is either asexual, and aromatic, or gay for L. I don't allow anything else for light, as it's not him, at all. and I know that kaito and aoko like each other in Canon, but I still want to see kaishin, but that part is fine, the characters act like that. everything else is very good, I love it. I just want to see some yaoi. |
| Guest chapter 40 . 4/20 Nice stales on all parties |
| Guest chapter 40 . 4/20 Def Misa |
| Guest chapter 33 . 4/20 I feel bad about Aoko/Light |
| Guest chapter 29 . 4/20 Love the overlapping sides of pov |
| Guest chapter 28 . 4/20 Of course, a dead body |
| Guest chapter 27 . 4/20 Here, Kaitou! |
| Guest chapter 25 . 4/20 Great! Love the clash of hero complex vs god complex |
| Perhapsormaybe chapter 16 . 2/19 I am 16 chapters in after starting this yesterday, but I have to stop to review lest I forget. This is incredible. Perfectly in character, good writing and an intriguing premise. Great job! |
| A Brilliant Loser chapter 40 . 7/8/2019 Wow seeing new updates made me so happy I went and reread the whole fic OTL just Wow Their lives are gonna be so much more complicated that it's both awesome and ridiculous at the same time tbh |
| xThomas2 chapter 23 . 1/3/2019 I am miffed. How can she just straight up tell Kira everything? Sure, not literally everything, but for Kira it may as well be. Kira is a murderer. This is a very poor decision. Anyway.. I'll see how it goes from here. Crazy choices don't ruin it, they just need better justification. |
| cesar chapter 1 . 10/26/2018 like |
| blackkyu chapter 40 . 5/5/2018 The second has arrived! |
| arda chapter 40 . 4/26/2018 really looking forward to part 2 |
| Junior VB chapter 40 . 4/23/2018 El plan de Shinichi para engañar a Light está funcionando. ¿Un falso Kira? Interesante. - Shinichi's plan to trick Light is working. A false Kira? Interesting. |
