Ooo I love a dominant law! What a lovely story, short but full of emotion! And I'm always amazed by the creative settings you come up with. Never would have thought about skateboard racing!

This is the first LawKidd I have ever read. Your Law is enough a cold, clever bastard to play the role of who is top in a realistic way. I may have preferred a less submissive kidd but maybe he was so shocked by the discovery that he wants to be bottom that he wasn't able to face Law. Anyway, good . I was quite surprised by the fact that in all the kiddxlaw I read law was bottom.

I really loved this! I wish you could do another part to it where Kidd tops or just even an extension of this 'one shot' XD awesome!

Hehe, Just finished reading...I LOVED IT. I really wanted to see kidd get his revenge on law hehe v
Any chance you're going to write that? I really hope so

You know what?
This damn story. I completely fell in love with it. Seriously, throughout the hole story I emagined it to be an OVA from Oda-san.
It's great and the characters fit in perfectly, the race combined with "energy " is a great idea. Likewise the fact to have only five types of energy is well done, it ain't to much but also enough.

The relationship between Law and Kid developed sweetly. At first I was iritated with Kid not topping, but I must say I'm surprised to not see Kid act like a clichée girl and eventually standing up against Law.

But.
But I liked the end the most; Kid wasn't sulking about Law, he fought against it. That was a great end to a great fanfiction.

I hope I'll fall for all your stories like that. 3 3 3
Sweet kisses
Lariko

...This was so freaking amazing! I love this beyond words, especially when Law's on top because he is a freaking badass! Plus, a uke! Kid is freaking great! Thank you for writing this and i am reading this at like 2 in the morning it was that good!

~Aryes

I loved this story.. Thank U very much :-)

aM PRETTY VERY MUCH HAPPY I FOUND THIS PERFECT FIC, it was sad, hot and fluffy it made me smile and feel the story to no end, loved ur writing that i doubt i wont read this again over and over, cant WAIT TO SEE ANOTHER UPDATE FROM YOU, THANK YOU FOR BEING AMAZING AT WRITING I LOVED THIS SO MUCH U HAVE BO IDEA *sobs endlessly*

Dear,
This fanfic deserved more loves and credits.

Ya see, it has been so long since the last time i look up for this pairing; KidLaw, or is it LawKid? Haha whichever it is. There aren't many of their stories, hence I'm glad i found this one, and it's beyond my expectation. I always see Kid as seme if Law is his partner, so at first it disturbs me a bit to know Kid is most likely the uke here, but as i try to imagine Law's possessive streak upon the red haired guy, plus his seductive voice, yeah, i can handle it till the end of the story. Though I almost wish you would make Kid win the race just to read how Law squirms with pleasure underneath him hahahaha ehem... Excuse my pervy thoughts.

In short, i love this, i adore this a lot than you could ever imagine. Sci-fi genre is actually my newly discovered preference for these past few years, and since i like to imagine scientific tech stuffs, i find it a tad easy to comprehend their world you build for them here. And skateboarding in mid air is just as how i always fantasise about, that magnetic field created in magnetic levitation, in such advance style to that of Maglev. The tension between Law and Kid are nicely described, even I feel the same way as Kid, also convince that i would act akin to his if Law ever flaunts his arrogance and superiority complex towards me. The race is awesome, and yes, i do realise you've threw in MarcoAce there briefly :P

This is a creative short story. With that four, five energies you devise together within the plot and so on. Oh about the coloured title of Kings, is it me or did you watch K series? K Project anime or manga? Totally remind me of it :D Good job, i like you and keep up your good work, this fanfic needs more publicity and hapters of development due to the brimming potentials. Anyways, polish your talent and good luck!

THIS WAS GREAT
I ADORED EVERYTHING
Your descriptions were all amazing and I'm just so gay for sci-FI board racing so this fic was like Christmas coming early
Great job 3

Waw.
This was just waw.
It's incredibly well written, has a real atmosphere (I looove that sci-fi side, that races idea), and I admire the way you care about details.
And of course : OMG THAT SEX SCENE. NOSEBLEED.
It's unusual to have LawKidd and not KiddLaw, but i really liked it. Also loved the fact that you didn't portray Kidd as a total heartless bastard (wich is often the case).
Anyway, i reeeeeaaaaally enjoyed this fic. I couldn't stop reading. This is waaaay too addictive. Thank you for that good moment i had reading it :D
Kiss kiss :*
Ps : sorry about my grammar, i'm French. Plus it's 1:30 am so i'm a little bit tired 8)

So Law is actually been attracted to Kidd since the very beginning... sweet! XD

Annnd the fic is finally over...
This totally deserve to be a full blown multichapter story! Really love it!

Thanks so much for writing!

I love both kidlaw and lawkid equally, and there's not many lawkid fic here, so, more lawkid is always greatly anticipated. XD
Well tbh my favorite is law bottom but he is the one in control. A powerbottom Law XD.

There won't be updates for a month... aww that's too bad. I'm eagerly looking forward to Ignis Draco... hehe but no worries. Please enjoy your time! XD

Oh Law, you bastard, how can you be so heartless? That was so painful for Kidd, being left like that, he feels like that he had been used/abused. I can feel Kidd's depression on his situation - leaving the race which he had spent half of his life to live in life solitude just like a hermit. Well at least Law managed to show up. I think Law had difficulty to express his feelings which just leaves Kidd in a kind of lost hope. At least they had managed to patch up *throws confetti* :)... The lovers in racetrack or rather they found love through a skateboard :D. LOL Who says Kidd is not playing dirty? That sly dog :). He knows Law is a pervert so those silly pants will absolutely do the trick. And yes, Law does not want to be an uke! LOL... He knows that Kidd will do to him once Kidd will be on top. Thanks for this wonderful story dear author-san :)

Ah c'est dommage j'ai du mal avec Law en "seme" et Kidd en "uke", je sais pas trop pourquoi je n'imagine pas Kidd aussi soumi. Mais l'univers reste super et je suis pressée de savoir comment toute cette histoire va ce finir. C'est vrai, c'est toujours pendant les examens, au moment où on n'a pas le temps d'écrire, que l’imagination est la plus forte. Et je sais, je suis trop angoissée, c'est dans ma nature. Surtout continue à écrire et à demain. Bisou

Wow this is definitely a hot chapter and yes, just I had said recently, definitely dominant Law was simply the hottest. I just like it how Kidd wanted Law badly but he constantly reminded himself that they were rivals on the first place. Boy what a punishment, wonder if Kidd can get up to continue his fight with the Dark King. Will wait for the next chapter :D