| Reviews for Metallover's Self-Insert Adventure Book 1 - The Insertening |
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   DG2 chapter 2 . 2/9 Yeah too much cussing and him acting like a prophet for my tastes. I'll go see your second volume and hope it improves. |
| DG2 chapter 1 . 2/9 Okay this MC is rather annoying. I hope it improves later on. |
| thepkrmgc chapter 12 . 2/7 this has been a hilarious read, great work! |
| thepkrmgc chapter 11 . 2/7 hopefully our hero can introduce the scientific method instead of just random facts... |
| thepkrmgc chapter 10 . 2/7 I see that our hero chose not to tell lucinia that mini-her is on the way, and to make his relationship status even more complicated... |
| thepkrmgc chapter 9 . 2/6 i suppose that its too much to hope for our hero moving ylisse closer to a democracy, chrom and lucinia might be good people, but their descendants might be as crazy as gangrel |
| thepkrmgc chapter 8 . 2/6 props to our hero for his pep talks, you're not without your share of wisdom so it seems |
| thepkrmgc chapter 7 . 2/6 well, at least our hero has accepted his inevitable doom |
| thepkrmgc chapter 6 . 2/6 the problem with the ends justifying the means is that we so rarely know the outcomes of our actions, our hero's level of foreknowledge helps, but when/if it fails, things are going to go horribly wrong |
| thepkrmgc chapter 4 . 2/5 yea, no way that this ends well for our hero... |
| thepkrmgc chapter 3 . 2/5 I dont think our hero has realised that he's going to break some hearts no matter who he chooses. game characters dont care that you chose to romance someone else: people do. |
| thepkrmgc chapter 2 . 2/4 drunken antics and bad decisions ftw! |
| thepkrmgc chapter 1 . 2/4 its rare to see a self insert that isnt afraid to portray themself in a negative light |
| mikewj93 chapter 5 . 7/31/2019 oh my gosh, teaching olivia to twerk. I haven't laughed this hard all week! |
| Viviene001 chapter 12 . 6/24/2019 Please tell me that one’s completed,or I will crash and burn because I like this so very much QaQ |
