Entertaining and enjoyable, thank you.

“Bet you didn't see that one coming did you?“
If repeated too much, it will feel forced; a cliche like the actual RWBY where people just somehow survive or flee due to deus ex machina.

I prefer how A Song of Ice and Fire does it where a plan fails due to another person’s plan and not cause of an accident or some stroke of luck. Some chaos is fine but too much is suspicious and immersions braking.

advice... Don't make him overly attach as ozpin will likely betray him.

taking his fake kindness is equal too death sentence.

did you think raven really left because of her tribe?
don't be stupid...

sigh... you... lack information on rwby and their origins... I pity the quality of your work...

this is utterly beyond stupid... Fallout is filled with back stabbing bitches, how come he can't noticed that ozpin is subtly confining him and brainwashing/manipulating him.

he is beyond... stupid... in my standards, he don't even care about the strange disperses of 'Mutants' nor the lack of radiation.

Im... Im done...

he even baby sit super human students...

Im.. Im done... good luck with your fanfiction.

BTW, Ozpin is a manipulating Batard that HE even kill his 4 daughters, Unplanned but he was the reason of it.

and if ya think about it, That was all GoL fault, Not Salem nor GoD.

Your getting this from Wiki aren't you?

AU?

something in their personality didn't add up.

so far in the canon since vol 7.

i see little to no reason on how Ozpin detected or even know how he arrived

like you said. there are no satellites and only CCT,
its a Communication tower with access in robots not GPS. as they did not have any satellites.

Blake saw no aura on the man but was heavily armed with Costume Armours and weapons with a mask?

her thoughts.

white fang.

Yang is overprotective but she knows that her sisbhas aura so a Rifle bullet didn't harm her Impervious auraunless its lowand if they can't take hits, then they are laughable and cringeworthy in the huntsman.

Team CRDN may be weak but keep in mind.
DON'T Nerf them into a lowly thugs as they have been trained at the age of 12.

seriously is this a WEAKER Rwby AU?

they used Motion sensors to locate life signatures to spot any infiltration

so it didn't make any sense how ozpin sense the courier.

100 metres is SOOOO close compared too the DOZENS of kilometre radius.

and they are only sending 8 STUDENTS.

ozpin know that the situation is in heat since the fall maiden is in a coma.

he should be sending ELITES like qrow.

at least he should have suspicious and thought that salems minions are being reckless.

and letting a stranger hold him?

a potential Salem's minion?

HAH! this ia clearly an Au with A Dumb Ozpin with lacking experience with a waste CENTURIES of age.

AND highly emotional TEENS for F sake, they are child soldiers For fucks sake...

HS students in my hometown are at least level headed.

you put too much yet too little at thesame time that you already halfway wreck their personality...

whatever goodluck.

"Please share your thoughts in a review" my thoughts were this is a great story and its a shame that it hasn't had an update.

Remarkably well written everyone is in character MC is remarkably human morality is outstandingly well written. Outcomes are remarkably true to life the hero’s don’t always win. One of the most well written pieces of fiction I’ve read in a while and I leave hungry for more. Don’t listen to the petulant children calling this bad they simply lack the understanding that their console command build invincible paragon couriers would be a really lame story character.

Keep on going I wait with baited breath.

i find it hard to believe a courier level 50 would struggle if bullets wounds, knifes, explosions , fire or i dont know a FUCKING DEATHCLAW didnt do the job

Nah... you don’t have the balls to kill Cinder. You are weak.

Overall, fanrastic job. The characters are on point, the Courier is likeable and relateable and his character arc so far has been a joy to experience. I hope you finish this awesome tale. Don't listen to the haters, they are just mad its not a crack fic with a Gary Stu.

Magnificent. This Is how a RWBY/Fallout fic should be written. No over powered lunatic curb stomping everyone, just a highly skilled survivor out of his element. You made the Courier human, unlike most of the fics on this site.

All hail, the lone wandere, the survivor, courrier six, the guy that can take entire factions, armies, plot kill deathclaw bare handed, have portable nuclear weapon... being a little bitch for everyone and telling night time story... Enjoy if it's your kind of cam

Please continue the story

Fuck this. You make him an underpowered bitch. That I can understand for you so called balancing. But you absolutely ruin it by only giving him 3 guns. 2 now that 1 is broken. This story is garbage. Goodbye.

noice.

You have captured me completely with this story.

If another chapter ever gets posted, I will be there in a heartbeat.