Great story! I kinda miss Luffy, but Lucy is very cool. I'm also happy that Lucy is, while being from the Grand Line and Mihawks kiddo and all, not too overpowered.

PS So she is Ace's half-sibling? cousin? Is there any Ace at all? And do Dragon and possibly Roger not have kids here? And what happened to Sabo, if the others don't exist? So many questions O.o

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i forgot what is this ,?
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Good chapter.

Very good story so far. Keep up the nice work.

damn...so sad...i wonder what's next though? thanks for the update! can't wait for more~

Here is another story with an OC Luffy but, you know, I like the angst that you create. And I don't remember ever reading about a Luffy who lives alcohol.

Well this opened a lot of questions... i hope i can read more soon.

Zoro to the rescue. Yes, focus on that part, not what has happened to her, and certainly not all the people she has named.

Anyway, great chapter! We got insight on her and a bit of what happened in the past

I love it! Can't wait to find out Lucy's past, she was held captive wasn't she? The marines or the tenryuubito? yiu mentione Roger being her uncle, meaning her mother was a Gol D. I wonder why she changed her name other than not seeming close to her grandpa and dad I guess...but who did she want to spite? Dragon...if so I'm really confused about the whole backstory! Can't wait till we get to find out more. Can't wait till they get to Baratie!

Great new chapter :)

interesting chapter. color me interested.

Loved the chapter. Thanks.

First time reading this fanfic. Truthfully? A little shocked by what I have read so far but nonetheless liked. I have some similar Luffy fanfics, but none of them ever completed. I hope this one does. Anyway, I'm curious about the green eyes witness as well as Luffy's childhood. So far, from what I can gathered and understood, Luffy was captured and tortured and drugged when she was very young, but somehow end up living with Rayleigh who may have saved him if I guess is right. That's why, I'm really curious about Ace and Sabo. Would they make an appearance soon? Did Sabo 'died' in this fanfic when he was young? Would I have to wait till the Crocodile part to read some ASL interactions? Anyway, thanks for the interesting and fun fanfic. I can't wait to see more.

Okay, I really love this. Lucy is super eccentric as far as I can tell and I enjoy reading about her. I'm also curious about what happened in her past, as well as what'll happen as she goes through her adventure. It's interesting to see the differences already in the way you write the crew and how they're going about things. I'm excited to see more. :)

...Was that a Naruto reference? I mean, she just said "Believe it!" just like Naruto does as a kid...