I love this book so far!

I like how Ned move past that point. Getting stronger to face opinions of others. I would suggest she remember wisdom or experience from her world to heal. Its been a long time but I hope you can continue.

How did they suddenly understand each other? I thought she was speaking another language? And please, stop making your character do a monologue. There should be an exchange between characters. Emphasize on who was talking because you got the convo jumbled up.

... Nice

*eye twitching* Would he fucking stop calling her an alien anomaly?!(no offense to you author-chan)

This was so different from anything else of this storyline I’ve read and I mean that in the best way! It’s so heartfelt, simple yet complex, and you can actually relate to the character and experiences compared to others. And for sure this was the first time I’ve read of an Indian girl in any fan fiction and I loved it! You should definitely write more when you have the time. I love your comparisons and inserts of poetry and quotes. Beautiful!

i really love Ned's and Sasukes friendship. It feels genuine. And also, since ned has no chakra, wouldn't she be immune to genjutsu? sine it works by manipulating the chakra in the body.

You managed to capture something that many fell to catch: realism, show not telling, personality, character, individuality, empathy, mentality, and more that I can't think of right now. This book is perfect and stands uniquely in a world that craves individuality. You even captured how exotic our looks would seem to the people in Naruto and that is a proud feature but there is only one small thing. You need to UPDATE! It is so inhumane to leave us on such a cliffhanger. Please, I'll help you if you want, message me if you have a writer's block. I will do what's within my power to help you this book just needs to continue.

I come from an indian family but im not from India. It makes up the majority of my ancestory but there are a lot of other cultures mixed in as well such as Malay Filipino arabic and others but I identify as indian as it makes up most of my heritage and culture. I would like to see more reference made to it. And i like the idea Of what the characters reaction would be to such a different culture. Maybe a bit of culture shock? I look forward to when you write about the episodes where naruto and rock lee and others visit the curry shop. I often laugh imagining that ned will the curry with everyone expecting her to die from the spiciness and it turns out that she doesnt even flinch because its like a staple food In indian house holds and everyone just freaks out about it. Its nice that there is such a culture difference in the character and its nice to see her bridge those gaps as the story progresses. So please update soon im dying to see chapter 17. And i like that you did the hokages point of view as well.

Please update soon. Im curious about the next Chapter. I really like the complexity of human emotions in the Story line.

I absolutely love this, though I cringe so hard overtime she says “I’m from a universe that was completely destroyed” because I expect at least ONE person to call her out.

No such luck tho. lol

Not so realistic, mainly because in this world we have Chakras and stuff... it's just blocked.

This story is soooo amazing. It one of the most interesting stories I've ever read. I am so lucky to have found this story because it's one of those awesome, and beautifully-written stories that people don't get to read and experience because of its low review, favorite, or follow count. I literally have never read a story like this one and I'm happy that I'm able to.

This is sofriggin amazing and OMG a person of color as the main character, its so refreshing and the glimpses of her culture make this story great. And omg neji is a little douche nugget and this is so great!

what made you think of this?

please continue this story