What a adorable RoWen.

Poor Natsu, lol. He's always getting picked on. I think this story was really realistic when it comes to love affairs

Heyy hey!

What a CUTE story! Made me squeal with excitement!

I think your writing's great. The only thing is fluency. Sometimes I feel like your sentences just don't really flow as well as they could. For example, in line 7, you're talking about how Romeo wanted to ask Wendy out because he felt that she deserved that. That's what I would write. "He wanted to do it the right way, because he felt that Wendy deserved that" or something similar. Little things like those. Other than that, and some grammar mistakes, like capitalizing what you shouldn't and forgetting commas, this fanfic was really fantastic. Keep it up! I'm looking forward to reading more by you!

That was really really cute.

This was very nice. Your writing was pretty good, and I admit, you had me chuckling several times throughout your story.

And lastly, thanks for writing this. RoWen needs more love :)

Amazingness is amazing

This is a really cute one shot!
Please do some more RoWen ones, there are hardly any.
There were a couple of times where you put a capital where it wasn't needed, but apart from that, pretty decent grammar, and the plot was suitable for a one shot too.
Could you perhaps do a sequel?
Also, don't worry if you don't get too many reviews at first, there will be more, I promise!
Keep writing :)

Very cute! Thanks for the laugh.

I am fangirling so hard right now :D Wooohoo go Rowen!