Reviews for Blurred Sadness |
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mikaylyn213 chapter 1 . 2/16/2019 When Will you update on this it's incredible poor steven |
TheFandomVortex chapter 1 . 9/20/2015 Oooooooooooo oooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo! I love this! I ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo this. Ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/31/2015 I love angsty tragedies, keep it up! BUT I noticed that every word was capitalized when it doesnt need to be |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/31/2015 In my opinion, Steven was being overly angsty. So much that it was out of character. I recommend only capatalizing when necessary. Happy writing! |
Siiillltt chapter 1 . 7/31/2015 Ooooooookkkkayyyyyy... |
Jay-the-Fangirl chapter 1 . 7/31/2015 I love it! This is really good! |
illuminari storyteller chapter 1 . 7/31/2015 Not bad, some punctuation and grammar hete and there plus the setting in which you typed so the beginning of every word is capitalized. But all together I like the story, the setting and the suspense have me wanting to know more, I love steven universe but I always wonder what if the story took a dark turn or something, please let me know more! |