Reviews for Blurred Sadness
mikaylyn213 chapter 1 . 2/16/2019
When Will you update on this it's incredible poor steven
TheFandomVortex chapter 1 . 9/20/2015
Oooooooooooo oooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo! I love this! I ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo this. Ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
Guest chapter 1 . 7/31/2015
I love angsty tragedies, keep it up!
BUT
I noticed that every word was capitalized when it doesnt need to be
Guest chapter 1 . 7/31/2015
In my opinion, Steven was being overly angsty. So much that it was out of character.
I recommend only capatalizing when necessary. Happy writing!
Siiillltt chapter 1 . 7/31/2015
Ooooooookkkkayyyyyy...
Jay-the-Fangirl chapter 1 . 7/31/2015
I love it! This is really good!
illuminari storyteller chapter 1 . 7/31/2015
Not bad, some punctuation and grammar hete and there plus the setting in which you typed so the beginning of every word is capitalized.
But all together I like the story, the setting and the suspense have me wanting to know more, I love steven universe but I always wonder what if the story took a dark turn or something, please let me know more!