Ya know, even though I’ve been keeping up with the newer episodes, and I’ve SEEN what kind of a douche bag Acnologia is...I still feel bad that he’s dying in this story. You make him seem like a kid guy.

It’s so hard to read this story, now that the new episodes of the Alveraz War are out. It all feels so messed up and twisted. Above all else...sad. They should never have been through that shit.

What the hell is the deal with people using the word ‘belladonna’ for every fic were Lucy and Cobra are together?! There is literally a fic called ‘Dance of the Belladonna’.
Again, Cobra hates the cold.

I’m still pissed at u for killing off some people. And there were a LOT of couples I hated. I still cry when I think of Erza and Jellal (the originals of course) and I wish u hadn’t of done it.
It was a fantastic story. Drama, crime, mystery, murder, EVERYTHING really. I give it a and will continue with ur stories. I loved it so much that I want to add it to my reread group.
Ur an amazing author. Hope u continue writing. Bye!

Damn. I’m stupid. I just figured out why u named the cry baby Gonzalez. U should have named Artemis Michelle and Cheshire Imitasha.

HOW could YOU?!

(Insert bitter laugh) yeah right. If I know ANYTHING (which I DONT) then I know Zeref will make a comeback and then lose. (Hopefully)

YAY! NICE JOB LUCY! u killed Brain! Poor Kinana. She was Cobra’s best friend.

Your story makes NO sense.

How is all this over Mavis?

Poor Kinana.

Awesome chapter

I’m starting to get ROYALLY pissed at this Tory. U have all the couples I HATE. But it was well thought up of and is very interesting. Sooo I will continue.

Wait. Who is Zeref betrothed to? Mavis or Lucy? Also THANK YOU for adding who’s POV it is

loved how this all played out. Please don’t add in the bunny girl. She is so creepy. And sadistic. Poor Shelia. Fuck u Natsu
Love how Ajeel and Invel were terrified of Lucy. Glad u added Jackal

NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO! WHY MARD AND MIRA?!
poor lucy. Poor EVERYONE still don’t get why u had it Everlue and not Bora. Still. Both are fucking little shits.
Great chapter otherwise. I’m guessing Everlue stalked...Lucy? U better tell us

Where’s Richard? I noticed he’s not here. I keep forgetting to ask this but how did Erik not notice what Dan was doing? I mean he IS a psychic after all.

WHY do soooooo many people put Mira with Mard?! It’s DISGUSTING! I never liked that little bitch. Hope u make him the villain

Bruh. Their lives were dark way before this. And in fics, NO ONE is innocent. And ‘sweet’ I wouldn’t call Mirajane THAT. LOVED ABSOLUTELY LOVED the little stunt Mira pulled with the boss
Definitely not a fan of Sorano and Gray. But...this story is good so I will continue. Usally a story with I couple I hate, I will IMMEDIATELY stop.
GREAT chapter

P.S. u having Gray do THAT reminded me when he and Cancer danced. I still have nightmares about it. (Shudders uncontrollably in disgust)