Reviews for Little Hell |
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![]() ![]() I loved this story. Please update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The simplicity of this... AH! It just makes so much SENSE. I love the way you let the reader inside Kai's head. Honestly half the time he's just speaking what me as a show viewer is thinking. Ugh if you ever wanted to continue just know you will have avid readers! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story so far, hope to see another chap soon. Thanks for keeping Kai smart cause seriously his time in the real world where form being super clever to really dumb found |
![]() ![]() Your characterization, so far, is SCARILY on point. I'm really enjoying the Bonkai interaction, it really echoes their dynamic on the show when it was at its best, but more than that, you've really nailed Bonnie and Kai on an individual level as well -even the way you've written Damon, Elena, and Jeremy comes across as highly believable. Hope everything is well and you're having a good new year! Looking forward to the next chapter, thanks for writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like seeing Kai's emotional growth, as well as his willingness to call everyone on their b.s. He may be a reforming sociopath, but that actually gives him an insight the others don't have because emotions don't usually overwhelm him. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Now, this is interesting. This makes so much sense. If the show spent a little less time trying to force Delena to happen, maybe it would have been worthwhile. |
![]() ![]() Please update soon. This is so refreshing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good read! Enjoyed your twist with how Kai brought Bonnie back. I liked complexity and layers of Kai and Bonnie's characters. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you for updating! This woke up all my BonKai feels that were long dormant. Hope you update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is BRILLIANT! Truly amazing & 100% original... I just can't get enough! Hell, I actually went back a re-read it several times...THAT'S HOW GOOD IT WAS! Nor could I get over how well it was written. Girl, you're one amazing and very talented writer, and I can't wait to read more. THX for sharing! |
![]() ![]() Yes moreeee |
![]() ![]() LOVE THIS SO MUCH! |
![]() ![]() Oh my god i loved this |
![]() ![]() ![]() ugh it's whatever. I'm just glad you updated! been waiting for this a while. it was worth the wait. |
![]() ![]() I love thisss. Please update |