Reviews for The First Five Times |
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Rosalix Archangel chapter 2 . 2/1/2016 This is both really hot and super cute! Keep up the good work! I hope you update soon. |
Alice P. Snow chapter 2 . 8/21/2015 Oh my gosh, YES! It's so cute, sexy, romantic, and even has bit of humor thrown in. I love it. |
jgrl68 chapter 2 . 8/10/2015 aw i love them! great scene! |
I am Dead and Gone chapter 2 . 8/9/2015 What a great chapter with HOT, HOT, HOT LawLu sex scene!...I love it...Thank you very much...I am looking forward to the next chapter. |
dancingjadedragon chapter 2 . 8/8/2015 Hahaha...Law's late for work! |
Guest chapter 2 . 8/8/2015 Oh wow, this is so hot. Like, ok wow excuse me I need to fan myself for a bit. Nice job in writing smut there! ...although if I may nitpick, perhaps you could change the wording in Luffy's dialog, "..., baka Torao!" to its English equivalent? Well it might be personal, but reading random Japanese word thrown in while the rest of the dialog are in English kinda throw the mood out of the window. Especially during sexy times scene. That's just my two cents really, it's up to you if you want to change it or not. This is such a promising series I hope you could keep up the good work until the end :D |
fattummyturtle chapter 2 . 8/8/2015 Wow... That was glorious! Excuse me, I need some paper for my nose. |
Rei-the-Rat chapter 2 . 8/8/2015 Omg~ Thank you! It's cool if Law misses one day, yeah? Because fuck that was hot. His boss will just have to understand. Can't wait until you write more and once again thanks you for updating |
Rei-the-Rat chapter 1 . 8/2/2015 This made my day and it was a bad day so thank you for giving me a little LawLu to get me through the next few hours. I hope to see more form you soon |
ForeverOffline chapter 1 . 8/2/2015 Luffy definitely delivered! XD for a second there, I imagined him doing the challenge accepted pose. Looking forward to the rest! |
I am Dead and Gone chapter 1 . 8/2/2015 Yeahhhh, a really hot LawLu sex scene, I love it and enjoy it very much. And...it is just only the first time, there will be four more times for LawLu having hot sex like that...Wow, so wonderful, I would love to see them, I can't wait to see them and I really really look forward to them. Woohoo...I am so excited...I hope you can give us one of the best LawLu PWPs ever. By the way, I want to share with you...that I really love LawLu, they will be always my OTP...and I love the sadistic seme!Law and adorable uke!Luffy. |
VongolaDecima chapter 1 . 8/2/2015 Ahh I love LawLu so much~ I swear this couple is definitely my OTP cause Luffy is all kinds of adorable and Law can so sadistic sometimes but we know he means well. Anyway great job on the first time! |