YES! Thank you for this smutty story!

Hehehe that was so sexy and cute; man I was hoping Hidan would come inside after getting off the phone with dei to change his mind then see them in action before laughing or asking to join in lmao

I liked it and yes kakuzu got the best tan ;p

A wax! Holy coconut kittehs! That's genius! Why didn't I think of that? Oh chaann, you sly dawg. X'D
I loved it! It's the sort of thing that's rarely included in stories, but you managed to nail it with your unique blend of humour and realism! You're never short on originality... I tip my hat to you! X3

I also now proclaim "Deisexual" to be a legitimate sexuality, and I think it's amazing that included one of Deidara's canon quotes as well. All in all, I think you did a great job in capturing him; I like this new egotistical, sassy player. :3
And Sasori was written perfectly too; delightfully uke-ish but still as fiery and bitter as ever! X'D

This didn't even need proof-reading, and I can't tell you how glad I am that you decided to post it now. Fantastic work! The ending was just plain cute and I enjoyed Hidan very much! :D
(I can imagine Sassy with a hickey bikini too. Now that's one outfit that isn't too expensive - meow~)

Always looking forward to more! You deserve a big basket of Oreos for this. :3
Much love and kisses! x

You write such cute stories about Sasori and Deidara...this one was another great topic XD

Well~ it is a Deisaso ... But because you're one of my fav authors i don't care :3 your fanfictions always give me those feelings ~ HOW DO YOU DO THAT OMG I LOVE YOU!
Anyways~ i think i know what sasori brought *giggles* yeah nice move sasori , i think that it's a good move to convince deidei *

"Eggcitedly" I made the weirdest noise when I read that. XD
I hate the beach too, Sasori. but I can see why Dei likes it so much, bikinis are definitely hot. But the pool is a great alternative; no suckish sand, no animals lurking about the water, and plenty of bikinis.
Update sooooooon! You're killing me here!

DeiSaso! *Squeals* Yes! Oh chaann, you know exactly what a girl wants! Jashin bless you! :3

I took one look at the title and thought: "I dunno where this gonna go but I'm damn sure liking it so far". X'D

I can sympathise with Sasori; the beach always upsets me with its sandy beachness. TT
I love his jealousy towards the bikini girls, and his little thought tracks, and the adorable way he looks at Deidara. Delicious with a nice backside. Yum. X'DD

I have a good idea as to why he's fidgeting too, looking like he's trying to "burst a boner". *Laughs* Oh the amount of legend here is too much for meh. X'D
Plus... "Eggcitedly" - I see what you did there. I approve. XD

Please update soon! You're teasing me by leaving it like this, bro. X3

I'm not a sucker for DeiSaso, but yur stories always give me a good laugh with a sense of perverted glee. Wonderful mix I must admit. Sasori in a bikini does sound quite appealing though, so I'll be looking forward to the next part x3