Reviews for Roommate Struggle |
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Fi Suki Saki chapter 1 . 4/14/2019 Jealous Kaito is Great! Super Angry Shinichi is also Great! And I also like the fact that Heiji is still the roommates after they finally get together. But also with Hakuba so those four life together. I mean, Imagine just Heiji with those two would he awkward, best friend or not. Since being third wheel is cringy and uncomfortable. I Love it the ending so much! |
Threeisme333 chapter 1 . 2/6/2016 Wow, you did pretty damn good for a first shot. You should most definitely write millions and millions more of these lovely bundles of joy. And I don't even ship KaiShin...well, that's debatable. I keep trying to convince myself that I am totally and undeniably a ShinRan shipper but I'm pretty sure it's not working. Oh well. |
Jennosaur chapter 1 . 9/7/2015 Cute :) And very long too. I always enjoy a good lengthy one-shot. Keep up the great work! |
AngelsBeast chapter 1 . 8/26/2015 its a great story! and it really was your first? Continue writing kaishin! you have a talent there... |
EverThePhantom chapter 1 . 8/17/2015 I thought this was done pretty well; my only real complaint is that you sometimes don't put punctuation at the end of sentences. I always love to see the Gosho Boys interacting, especially when they're stuffed into a tight space and there's at least one pairing, like they are here ) |
seireidoragon chapter 1 . 8/17/2015 This story was amazing! Great job! |
Shana-Fujioka chapter 1 . 8/12/2015 I really liked this one shot. I totally could feel the pain Shinichi experienced and his reaction after Kaito's confession was so cute! This story will now land on my favorite list. Well done! :D I'm looking forward to more ShinKai/KaiShin-stories from you! :3 |
saphira88 chapter 1 . 8/10/2015 So CUTE XD I love KaiShin! Please make more! |
HermitsDisguise chapter 1 . 8/9/2015 You need to write more stories with this four as roommates! It'll be hilarious, oh great story by the way |
Yuzurie chapter 1 . 8/9/2015 Please continue to write more Kaishin, never get tired of their relationship~ I really like this fic, not too ooc and I just love how you make them interact with each other. About suggestion, how about adding Ai or Akako to the loop, will be interesting I think Anyway, thanks for sharing this story xD |
Tigerlilly567 chapter 1 . 8/5/2015 You should make a one shot where they are all roommates and there's a new kid who's obsessed with Shinichi but since shinichi's oblivious he doesn't realize that and kaito gets extremely jealous ;) and I loved this story by the way it's really hard to come upon a well written story (: |
LMeg9.20 chapter 1 . 8/5/2015 this fic was perfect. I loved the way you wrote Aoko. Normally I find her to be annoying and sort of a bad friend in most other fanfictions, but she seems more like a real friend in your fic. I love the way she gave Kaito back his confidence to confess to Shinichi. And I really REALLy loved when Kaito finally did confess to Shinichi and he figured out that Shinichi liked him back by Shinichi's reaction. |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/5/2015 Yes pleaseee Writee moareeeeee I really like this story So if you could continue it that would be really great |
Spade chapter 1 . 8/4/2015 Really cute, I would like to see you write more. As for One-Shot ideas how about you try writing ShinKai (Shinichi as the seme)? There aren't many like that so.. uh well, looking forward to whatever you decide to write next~ |
Kensy Echo chapter 1 . 8/3/2015 I like reading a KaiShin FFn where they are university students X3 And this FFn is really good. I enjoy the whole story! Your writing style is nice and the pace is good. I don't think they are OOC, so don't worry :D Well, I don't know Hakuba and Hattori's relationship in anime and manga (because I only love Kaito and KaiShin), but many FFn potrait the two of them have a bad relationship, lol. You should write more KaiShin! Keep writing! ;) KensyEcho |