This is interesting, never thought that Future Lucy and Future Rogue could be possible. It was clear to me that Lucy love Rogue less, or their relationship seems out of companionship, because they're the only ones left for one another. This just screams grief for me. However, it would be great if you would write more RoLu stories, it's just gives me/us wonders how writers would portray their relationship due to the fact that Future Rogue killed Future Lucy in front of Present Lucy. Thank you for sharing your work with us.

I think it's interesting. I also think there are a lot of unanswered questions! Please tell me you will continue this...! I would love to read more of this! Please?!

Everybody's talking about if the baby's Rogues or Natsus when it's clearly Rogues. You would think that the "even as she laid in HIS(Rogue's) arms, carrying THEIR child" and the fact that Lucy told Rogue that they(Lucy and the baby) are there for him would be enough evidence. I mean, who comforts a guy you know loves you with a baby that's not his?

who's the papi?

I thought it was good. But it still feels more like a Natsu x Lucy fic to me, cause I wasn't convinced she loved Rogue or was going to by the end. NaLu for life! :D :D

I'm crying. I shouldn't be... But I am.. And I'm not really into NaLu so now I'm not gonna be yelling at you about how horrid rogue/luc ship is. although it is short, you really conveyed one thing perfectly: grief.

I wish you would turn this into a multiple chapter story.

I loved this! I was bawling during the flashback...

I literally cried reading this. And I'm a little confused. Is it Lucy and Natsu's child or Lucy and Rouge's child?