Reviews for Return of Old Legends, Rise of New Heroes V2
Guest chapter 4 . 11/29/2019
Keep going
Percival 'Jaded Black chapter 4 . 10/5/2019
Hey, I honestly wouldn't mind either, I enjoyed your work, I was Ricardo Rodriguez before XD, since then I actually wrote my own crossover but with DC, I have quite the fanbase now, thanks for being one of the writers that inspired me to write, I would like a collab one day if you wouldn't mind.
KuroArashi94 chapter 4 . 10/3/2019
Push the reboot button on this one. There is so much new lore from both series that can be implemented.
Felon GT chapter 1 . 10/2/2019
Jiraya isnt even a 1000 . Id say early 100 maybe 150 to 230

Note that the things that sucks about chakra usersisthat notall their abilities rise together like ki users. They have to trainin each of these things separately. Tsunade is strong but nit as fast as gai. Kakashi is great at ninjutsu but not good in taijutsu in gai lvl ki users all their perks increase.

Id expect jiraya to have panic attack almost near death for feeling the endless power goku has.
Guest chapter 4 . 9/29/2019
Pls continue
Seth chapter 4 . 9/27/2019
I'm going be honest with you and tell this is something only you can decide but you can get people's opinions to help influence the decision I am for cleaning it up but in the end that is for you to decide.
Las piedras chapter 4 . 9/29/2019
No lo se.
Cualquier cosa es buena para mí.
Guest chapter 4 . 9/27/2019
The story is nice. I don't agree with the power levels and Goku smoking weed is weird as hell, but besides that I don't have complains.

You can rewrite the story if you find it necessary, but IMO you only need to change some little things.
Hypnoyoukai chapter 4 . 9/28/2019
you should restart , tiny bit smarter goku aswell pls
SuperSaiyajin4Vegeta chapter 4 . 9/27/2019
I think you should restart. Not because I don't like it, but because you will be able to see how much you have changed as a writer by simply comparing your products side by side.
SuperSaiyajin4Vegeta chapter 3 . 9/27/2019
I believe Frieza's power was 120 million, not 12 million.
That being said, I think my biggest issue was you talking about destroying a Ferrari F12. That is blasphemy and such speak should be banished from history.
berrus-sama chapter 1 . 9/27/2019
reboot, and don't leave goku as an idiot for new terms. he might be an idiot, but not when it comes to understanding terms, otherwise he wouldn't understand migatte in gokui and make a joke out of it, and the word is quite complicated by the way, so yes he understands complicated words, he wouldn't confuse the word "hokage" and he's smart enough to fly a spaceship (he went from yadrat to earth with the gnyu ship)
he has problems with numbers and he gets a medium grade (which is a lot for goku's personality) in the test proposed by vegeta in the champa tournament.

Some tips for you, first thing said above goku is not a complete idiot in non-fight issues, he only has the average knowledge, which is very high for a country man like goku.

The goku is actually someone very wise, although sometimes he forgets that.

I now recommend using a mix of super history and GT history as follows; gt events did occur, but with some different things because of disobeying a bilss order, the destroyer asked wiss to seal the part of his memories from the moment they received divine power, even before the start of the GT. After the events of GT, Bilss asks Wiss to release these memories so that Goku can visit Zeno Sama. After that the plot just modifies the chapters of your fic to suit the tips.

And for the technological regress of mankind you can say it was due to a stupid war, or someone whose powers are similar to those of Moro. so the few survivors were remaking the world. and dende survived, being in the hyperbolic time chamber.

and goku's goal could be to restore peace in the world, and create a team of Earth defenders.

so that when he is away the earth is safe.

you can even make up an excuse that goku is there, because you know that the otsutsukis are behind kaguya, and to add to the story you could say that they want to create a universal seed (the plan of hearts in super db heros) just that sometimes to use fighter energy, they do so by creating shinju trees, which destroy the planets when the tree is mature enough, and the chakra is the energy of all the planets that destroyed through this method imbued with a fruit.

in that goku could teach specific techniques to specific ninjas, example to lee he could try to teach ultra instinct, to kakashi he could teach tayoken, or mafuba
reaver216 chapter 4 . 9/27/2019
Keep going
blackcat505 chapter 4 . 9/27/2019
Continue the story
Felon GT chapter 2 . 9/27/2019
Restarst the story i say. Find a new premise than a ultimste power sitting around watchung the next gen heroes fight the newevil and stepping in when its to much for then.
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