What Eric didn't realize that there are 3 stiffs.

Looks like Caleb wanted to smack some heads.

For Caleb and Beatrice being 5 months apart, were one of them were adopted or are they twins and Caleb was born prematurely? Asking since it's impossible for them to be born 5 months apart and not being twins since a human pregnancy is 9 months and it takes 2 months after birth for the female cycle to get back to normal. The most logical way for them to be apart and born in the same year is 11 months.

So, are you still going to keep the story going?

Loved the update! Hope caleb is a nicer brother in your fanfiction and not a ass !

I think it's a wonderful idea to do it this way!
I just think its a lot like tris, a lot of the thoughts and feelings are nearly exactly what tris thought or felt. But otherwise it's really good and I can't wait to read the next chapter!

Oh my god thank you so much for updating! I know last time I posted a review I was on as a guest but I put my name in as Ashely. But this was an amazing chapter and I would love to see what Caleb does! Does Tris end up with Tobias? I think that it would make a fun twist if she ended up with someone else and four gets jealous. Anyways thanks so much for the new chapter! I hope you update soon! Thanks so much and I really love your writing style!

what if divergent was in big hero 6 XD

Oh my gosh I love this story! I would love if you would do another chapter with tris with tobias and Caleb with Christina! And it would also be good if you made Will get jealous and some fights with Tobias and Eric. That would be quite a cat fight! I love how you stay on topic, and you know what you are doing. Thank you so much for writing this! This is the best fan fiction i have read yet!