A very sweet and wonderful chapter. It's great how the 2 little girls are becoming great friends. I think the next side story should be a Halloween party and the 2 sweet little girls going on their 1st trick or treating together.

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That was a great chapter. I think for the next chapter, you should have Minatsuki and Shiro have a Friday at school and then a weekend at one of their parent's houses. How's that?

Perfect chapter as always. Next chapter should have Minatsuki and Shiro as babies and showing early signs of liking each other. the babies could also spend time with Mako's family and the Elite Four.

Perfect chapter as always. I can't wait to see the birth of their babies. perhaps Mako's family and the Eilte Four will be there as well.

Perfect chapter as always. I can't wait to see the birth of both couple's babies.

Perfect chapter as always. I'm glad Ragyo finally got what she deserved, even if she did off herself.

i am so disgusted with ragyo

Well that was a great chapter next chapter will have the final fight, right?

loving the story, really hoping that you see it through to the end!

Now this was an amazing chapter except for Ragyo molesting Satsuki like that, can't wait for part 2, when they finally give Ragyo what she deserves, if there was ever a worst excuse for a parent Ragyo is definitely one of them.

Excellent job my man I can't wait to see what happens next

Is there gonna be more

Nice I can't wait to see what happens next

Perfect chapter as always, I'm thinking the fight can be the next chapter, sound like a plan?