Reviews for Take a Chance |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Loved this! I'm not sure what was better, Max and Warren sexy time or Chloe's commentary! xD |
![]() ![]() Great balance of sweet in the first chapter and funny in the second! I can totally imagine Chloe teasing Max like that! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Actually I think this wasn't awkward enough xD No way their first time would go that smoothly! Good story though |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ohhh this is just so cute and hilarious XDD I love the sexy time but I do love most the morning-after-sex when Chloe is all excited asking her about her ape time XDDD |
![]() ![]() APE FOREPLAY! I laughed so hard I choked. This was such a great and much needed WarrenxMax fic! |
![]() ![]() I think I'm gonna call my boyfriend after reading this... |
![]() ![]() Great story. The first chapter was hot and the second was funny. I loved Chloe's ape puns. Great job once again. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was so funny and mood lifting. I seriously cried from all the laughing. I love this bonus part so much. It really shows Chloe and Max's beautiful friendship. Great job! |
![]() ![]() thank you for the bonus chapter. I laughed out loud reading "hipster monkey children" |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a cute fic. I enjoyed the world building / narrative bits. I do, though, have to question what the intent of the physical portions of the first chapter was since you cut the scene where you did. I'm not trying to be entitled, or whatever, just honestly asking the question. |
![]() ![]() Omg haha |
![]() ![]() ![]() *whispers* More... please... Max and Warren will and shall be my weakness! |
![]() ![]() That was amazing, You are a great writer. Love to see more grahamfield here. :) |
![]() ![]() This was pretty damn sexy! Hope you write more Warren Max |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't think thai was awkward or not good enough. I find this enough to describe everything Max felt. The story is perfect the way it is now. I enjoyed reading this so amazing job! |