Another nice story! I love reading these things.

It's a good chapter.

First off, is this going to be a multichapter story? If not, put up the "Completed" sign.

Grammatical mistakes in Chapter 1:

to Australia: to Australia. (with period)
I'm...I'm: I'm...I'm" (with quotation mark)
About sixteen months later (how about you put line breaks before this sentence?)

I don't understand why polygamous marriage is forbidden in some countries. Polygamy is the win-win situation to the man and women. It's much, much better for them than committing adultery left and right like there's no tomorrow. Of course, the man must not favors one wife over the others. He must treat them equally, physically and spiritually.

That's my two cents. Keep up the good work.

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