Oh that is so sad I wonder if you will carry this one on but thanks for a very good read

This is wonderful! So glad you decided to share.

I would really like to see a continuation of this, if you ever consider writing one. I loved how you described Jane's mind works at the beginning-the floor deductions were brilliant. And it's refreshing to see a casual, simple romance between Jane and Lisbon. Just a lunch together. At first, I admit, it seemed too inappropriate to me, considering all the drama in their lives. It's not like Jane and Lisbon to do things a normal couple does. But then the scene at the end with Jane in his room having second thoughts restored the Jane we know from the show. It's so sad that he let himself taste happiness for a moment, only to remember he can't have it. Very cleverly written. Thank you.

I liked it. Season 2 is like one of my fav season. But i could see this happen after Season 3, if Timothy Carter was indeed RJ. Hey even if you're not planning on continuing it, I think it's pretty good as stand-alone. But I'm going to follow just in case

very well written and thought out. i really enjoyed this. thanks.

I think this is fine as a stand alone. You should write more.

Nice are you going to continue the story?

Thanks for posting this, I really enjoyed it! I especially liked how Jane could tell everything that was going on by the sounds on the floor.

Oh Dear Dear Famous, Please tell me this isn't complete! Won't you let Patrick woo Teresa... maybe just a bit, to see how they handle it? This is too fantastic a beginning for it to end!

Oh wow interesting start. I like the idea of Jane and Libon slowly comming to their romantic relationship by dates like you did it. I hope for quick update ;)

This is begging for another chapter - nicely done

I guess in season two this could make sense but it seems rather early for a man who has lived for the memory of the family he lost and revenge on the monster that did it. Your writing is good but Im not happy where the timeline of this falls.
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Good story. Would have enjoyed reading more (of course your could change your mind about finishing it). Thanks for sharing it.

Very real and true to character. I really liked it. Good job

This is really very good! You have captured the feel of second season Jane and Lisbon very well. I hope you decide to continue this. Thanks for sharing!