| Reviews for The Horror of the Gum |
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  Guest chapter 1 . 8/18 Absolutely crazy! |
 Friendshipper chapter 1 . 5/23/2019 lolololololololololololol… Just.. LOL! |
| a prick chapter 1 . 8/19/2018 oh god |
| beast man1500 chapter 1 . 8/9/2017 You should make a full series. |
| dontaskk chapter 1 . 4/24/2017 this is the most original idea ive seen on this website! Pleaaasee make a longer more full version of this!it would be Awesome! |
| Catlover4536 chapter 1 . 10/15/2016 This should totally be a two shot when the series is over. It would be fitting. I loved it so much! Hilariouly scary. |
| Everlight18 chapter 1 . 10/15/2016 That devil fruit must have been quite tramitizing... Honestly, this is hilarious! I laughed the whole way through and I love the way you are detailed, yet not at the same time, is perfect for the tone of the story. Would love to see a teeth-wearing Luffy chewing gum and twirling his pipe as the crew watches in horror. Loved the little details about the captains excentricys and how he fights with the pipe like he did as a kid. Everyone feels sorry for the Straw Hat's. Though, come to think of it, wouldn't they be the Tooth Fairy Pirates in this? Or would Luffy insist on another name since he hates the Tooth Fairy? That sounds like a interesting one-shot idea. Can see him insisting on another name only for everyone else in the world to call them the Tooth Fairy Pirates and leaving him frustrated and slightly traumatized. I really enjoyed the one-shot collection too! You're a great writer! |
| Cacau Prime chapter 1 . 8/27/2016 Parabéns, isso é hilárion. |
| KiiroNoKitsune chapter 1 . 8/10/2016 This is funny! I like it lots. |
| going luffy senpai chapter 1 . 9/21/2015 Uh, oh... Does Law plan on having Luffy take Doflamingo's teeth and then Law taking them from Luffy? Or will he let Luffy keep them? Or is Luffy rubbing off on him? Important questions indeed... I can actually imagine this... *Diez in laughter* Love it. Love love love it. |
| Talonsen chapter 1 . 9/4/2015 Can't…review…properly…laughing…to…hard! |
| Unlimited Power chapter 1 . 8/31/2015 Horrifically hilarious. This made me crack up. I think you forgot Franky and his reaction to Luffy's ability. Though it would probably just be something like "Super cool". |
| NaaliaHivernal chapter 1 . 8/20/2015 Hi. Are you going to continue this or it was just a oneshot? please tell me you'll continue this it was beutifully hilarious Bye have a nice day!3XD |
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/9/2015 LMAO This. This is creative. This is glorious. I'll be seeing what else you write in the future. |
| Devlin Dracul chapter 1 . 8/9/2015 Please tell me that there's going to be a sequel!? This was sadistically awesome! I'm still smiling and laughing at the story! Oda-sensei! Please Hurry up with the Kaido and Big Mom fights! Give this genius more material to continue this beautifully sadistic and hilarious story! |
