I want to say I like this story, but I keep skipping 80% of it, since it's mostly pokedex entries. What happened to the original team? I could have sworn Ash had 5 or 6 Pokémon at that time

please continue

I came for the shipping, but stay for the story...very well done

My thoughts so far. There’s a lot that is weird about this story. The sentence structure is a little weird at times but it’s okay for the most part. The only real issue is the ‘time stream’ thing.. while it’s unlikely, the more reasonable assumption for him to have made would be that they were simply adrift for two weeks. While the truth could be a different dimension of time, that is one massive jump of logic there, thinking something was literally breaking the law of the universe before considering they just got lucky and were able to survive two weeks without drowning.

Wouldn't it create a bigger impact if she becomes AshGreninja at the last second and faints while being held like a bride?

Yikes~! Twice the sacrifice

Cilan: Love if left untouched doesn't age, it matures.

This was a fantastic read well done

You should add a hazard warning in the description, warning this story is so slow it might make you question whether or not life is worth living.

How can Ash have faced off against Mewtwo if he was stranded from the St. Anne? He only got on the ship after winning the Thunder Badge from Lt. Surge and he faced off against Mewtwo after sixth or seventh badge I believe. Plus, doesn't he deal with the Legendary Birds in the Orange Islands, which he went to after participation in the Pokémon League?

Your story has the wrong Serena character tag. Please fix this.

this is a great story! i had fun reading it! keep up the good work!

This is one of my favorite pokemon fanfics, to see it end is almost sad but to know that a sequel is in the works is making me wish I had a time machine.

What is the name of the sequel?

great chapter and well they need to talk to their families still now that the fog is gone