Reviews for Destiny Done Right
Anisabel chapter 4 . 5/24
I like your story, please continue more
camp1500 chapter 4 . 2/10
Not a bad start ... too bad it was never completed.
DontMindMe chapter 4 . 12/30/2019
Shame you stopped as your story have a very interesting plot and i would looking forward to seeing where it would go.
Jaculus chapter 4 . 12/14/2019
Damm this story had me and I was pulled in like I havnt been in a really long time I don’t know when the last update was but I pray this story hasn’t been lost to the ages of time like so many other please write more very well thought out and expect Executed
anjiepotter chapter 4 . 7/29/2019
good story. hope to read more
hunzbookwyrm chapter 4 . 6/17/2019
Great start hope to see more soon.
Corwyn chapter 4 . 5/15/2019
I'm enjoying this story so far and look forward to it continuing. Thanks for sharing it with us.
Putte90 chapter 4 . 4/26/2019
Please continue
bet7368 chapter 4 . 2/18/2019
Really enjoyed your story. Woundering if you're still writing? It's been awhile. Thank you for writing it.
Sarek5959 chapter 4 . 1/12/2019
Nice... Too bad its been abandoned.
Chuck chapter 4 . 11/19/2018
Just a note saying I have seriously enjoyed this work. The writing style is near professional level, and if you ever get back to writing, I'll be here waiting.

Happy Thanksgiving!
Lord Damon Darkfyre chapter 4 . 11/19/2018
May I have some more please?
V-rcingetorix chapter 4 . 10/21/2018
I like the updated version. Wish there were more coming - why do the best fics have to stop partway?

In the hopes of more, I'll leave a follow. Loved what I've seen so far!
Hoobs2 chapter 4 . 7/30/2018
Damn this is really good please come back to it!
tenga chapter 4 . 7/12/2018
Shame this is highly unlikely to be continued. It was an interesting premise. I've only seen one or two stories where Ginny was being dosed with love potion as well as Harry, and I've never seen one where she was the one dosing both of them. It was an interesting idea.

I am very curious about where the romance in this story was going, and how it was going to get there. And I very much would have liked to find out why Tonks didn't immediately go "urgh, how do you know who I am?" when Harry first greeted her.

Harry doesn't seem to know about the horcruxes, or there is some secret extra layer of immortality that Dumbledore never knew about. I really wonder how Harry was planning to fight Voldemort when he doesn't know how to end the war, as in the futute Voldemort kept on coming back to life again and again.

And since Voldemort now knows about Regulus and ia going to check on (and probably move or at least beef up the security around) his other horcruxes, Harry would have a much tougher time ensuring Voldemort's perma-death.

Tl;dr, This was a quite well written story with several intriguing ideas, a concept I hadn't seen before, a few conundrums for the characters and audience to solve...in short, it was shaping up to be pretty great. I shall add this to my alerts and hope against hope that one day your muse inspires you to continue this.
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