Reviews for Domesticate You
Kitty in the Box chapter 18 . 4/6
Oh I really love your Bulma here. I can't help but be drawn to her character especially. you got the right balance of tension and understanding between them right down to pat. I'm absolutely impressed. you've also maintained Vegeta's personality deliciously canon making this a more convincing piece of story. I like that touch of the bots that wasn't deactivated and hurting Bulma and freaking out Vegeta. I've never read that scenario before.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/25/2017
Lol. He's such a prude.
Guest chapter 18 . 1/25/2017
Will this story continue?
Prl16 chapter 18 . 11/23/2016
Finally they both relented! I loved this last chapter. They're a family, they're together and they accepted that.
DBZvegetabulma chapter 18 . 9/16/2016
oooh love it! so in character!
sky d chapter 18 . 9/13/2016
Great chapter.
xSmallLadySerenity13 chapter 18 . 9/12/2016
I so love them!
pukeko10 chapter 18 . 9/11/2016
Great, you are back!
maxridelover chapter 18 . 9/11/2016
glad this is back!
Lady of the Sky chapter 17 . 3/7/2016
This story? High five, my good writer. I'm enjoying every bit of it.
Samira Vongola chapter 17 . 2/15/2016
I expect updates soon
Elsass-Lothringen chapter 17 . 1/1/2016
Great story! I love it!
pansymoomalfoy32 chapter 17 . 12/22/2015
Oh no! There isn't more? Phooey. You're easily in my top 2 fave B/V writers. Would love, love, love to see more should the fancy strike you. Thanks for sharing.
pansymoomalfoy32 chapter 11 . 12/22/2015
You have a really good grasp on Vegeta's perspective. Even when not in his head, your Bulma points out his un-human behavior. I can really get and appreciate that he isn't from earth and thinks differently, but you do it in a way that doesn't seem clownish.
Also have been meaning to mention, I actually like that you allude to their sexual attraction without going explicit. Again, that writing mirrors the show. Obvi they had insane bunny sex and were way into each other...yet Bulma could easily embarrass Vegeta, who is shameless about so many other things. On top of these kinda contradictory aspects to his character, nothing is ever said in canon as to the specifics of their physical relationship. Soooo, I guess what I'm rambling at is, you've very deftly caught hold of tricky canon dynamics and I'm just really impressed/in awe. Love your writing!
pansymoomalfoy32 chapter 9 . 12/22/2015
"...Most Moms would not be happy if their daughter brought home a mean, alien warlord, then created a half-alien baby with him out of wedlock." - I want to frame phrases like this and put them on my wall. This is so perfect.
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