I've read this story several times, though I don't think I've ever written a review here. I just wanted to say that I love your attention to detail, the way you write, and the story you build. It's one hell of a hero's journey, and possibly the best read I've ever had when it comes to fanfiction.

Cheers, and thank you.

Holy shit that was amazing. One of the best fics I’ve ever read. Thank you for writing it.

I'm re-reading this again, and can I just say that I have a mental image of one of the Laconus operatives working in that hangar watching everything go to hell like 'what the absolute fuck'? That mental image is just... deeply funny to me. Whatever those fairies were being paid, it cannot have been enough to deal with Holly Short when she's on a mission. Amazing story! I'm glad to be re-reading it.

'Be well...'' I understand why you chose those words, because they are the last ones Root will ever say to holly, and I congratulate you on your AMAZING writing!

what?! No! Can't they let her keep the memories? It'll help her become a better officer!

You should start a new story of artemis and holly's life together

omg I was soooooooooooooo crying that was a very interesting and creative thing to do with finn loved it ( even tho I was crying )

You are an amazing author and that was an amazing ending.

That "very"is suppose to be"cry".

This chapter is so great. It made me very two times.

I don't know what to say. it's so sad and done so well. I can't even stop thanking about how I would most likely do what holly did. you've made it so realistic and just simply outstanding.

I was crying all the way though. it is very emonisonal and I love how her strength was holly

it is wonderful I love it. very exciting and getting on with the action is amazing not many action books do that I belive they should. the names are very creative, I love how you give us an insight to holly and coral's thought on a matter.

Another fabulous story. Thank you John Creel for writing another Artemis Fowl FF. They are truly fabulous stories that keep us wanting more. I certainly hope you do have more in the future. Merry Christmas to you and all!

This fanfic is absolutely amazing. That's all I have to say.