Reviews for 52 Pick Up
Mirabitur chapter 16 . 7/16
wait, come back! I wasn't done reading! *runs after author-chan*
MischievousAngel0923 chapter 16 . 5/26
I found and 're-read this gem while going through my alerts. I hope you come back and finish it someday. I love how naturally defensive Yumi is and how she can see through Huni's act.
Jummper chapter 7 . 2/7
thank you for write this. I love it
Jummper chapter 4 . 2/7
Aah ... Asian and they beautiful standard (glance at mirror)

uh, thats rough for highschool—er
Updown1234 chapter 16 . 6/1/2019
I'm so glad I found this. This fanfic is a perfect blend of canon and original content, and you've got the host's personalities spot on! Usually with this comedic type of anime, oc inserts tend to be wayyy over the top with their ocs or two dimensional, making their characters the epitome of angst or having a holy mother complex but Yumi seems like a real person with a good balance. Also the small twins are so cute, I would love to see more interactions with them in the future. Thank you for allowing me to not give up hope in finding more gems like these, and I wish you all the luck in finishing this piece! Keep up the amazing work PP)b
DemonMisstress chapter 16 . 4/25/2019
Cuttte storyy, you should update!
TheAdorableNerd chapter 16 . 4/15/2019
I love this story so much
eve-tsuki94 chapter 15 . 1/5/2019
Hola!
Me encanta tu historia, de todas las historias hunny/oc esta es una de mis favoritas. Me gusta mucho que resaltes los rasgos adolescentes de la personalidad de honney y no se lo vea solo siendo el loli-boy. No puedo esperar a leer otro capítulo de esta maravillosa historia, sobre todo espero con ansias el capítulo que llega renge, el de la piscina y también el de la playa. Bueno en realidad todos serían interesantes con yumi en la ecuación XD

Ah por cierto te escribo en español porque mi inglés es básico y no queria escribir con faltas de ortografía o algo asi, ojalá que sigas bien y hayas tenido un buen cierre de año!
Jewelsy426 chapter 16 . 1/3/2019
Ahhhhhhhhhh this story is so good, I'm so excited to see where it goes! Thank you so much for sharing your wonderful writing!
mitelea chapter 4 . 11/2/2018
What does yumi look like? Did I miss the description, cause so far all I know is that she's short and tan.
Morning-Star57 chapter 16 . 6/23/2018
I'm in love with this story! It's very well written and interesting to follow. It doesn't hurt that Yumi's such a likable, yet realistic character. The way you write her and her interactions with the hosts is very well done. Good job, can't wait for the next chapter.
Skywaters chapter 16 . 6/16/2018
I love your characters and i'm ooking forward to see how the relationships develop! Please keep writing :)
Bloody.Kirai chapter 16 . 4/24/2018
Well, I'm a new fan to this story, but I'm glad you got back into the fandom. Even if it's been a bit since the last update, I hope I don't have to wait two years xD I love this story so far, and your OC is great, I'm glad she's not rich-but-totally-understands-commoners, or a martial arts expert, or a candy lover, or an immediately-knows-who-Hikaru-is type of OC. There's some ok fics out there that are like that, but it's refreshing to stumble on a story like yours. I hope you update soon~(ish?). I'll be putting this one on my faves to keep an eye on it.
Keelan1210 chapter 16 . 4/1/2018
It’s nice to see Honey portrayed as the eighteen-year-old he really is even if it’s only briefly.
KkSsVv chapter 1 . 3/15/2018
i havent even started this story but the summary was amazing so im not stoppintil it's over
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