Reviews for Steam and Tears
GettingGreyer chapter 10 . 8/18/2019
God, I absolutely love this story.
Azula never meant to care for Ty Lee, but she does now. And she's never been closer to losing her. Her anger, frustration, and fear are really palpable and tangent in these last couple chapters. Ty Lee is finally beginning to question her and no longer follows her unquestioningly and unconditionally. Azula has come to yearn and need Ty Lee's unconditional love and affection in the same way that she needs human blood and she can't stand to see Ty Lee doubt or question her. It's infuriating and painful to her.
She took Ty Lee in as a human baby, but as she's said before in this fic, "sometimes I forget your human." She never truly forgets, I think, but she does consider Ty Lee as entirely seperate from humans which is why she finds Ty Lee's attachment to Suki to be so infuriating and frustrating.
Why should Ty Lee care for this stupid human? But Azula forgets thaf Ty Lee is human. That she's a human child whose never been more scared.
Suki is the changing point of their entire relationship.
For a long time now, Ty Lee has been able to ignore all the death and murder that occured in her environment because it was normal and it happened to "humans." But being out in the human world on her own, she was confronted with monstrosity. She was attacked by a ghoul—which she learns is created by people like Azula—and saved by a human, one of her own kind who she has never made a connection with. This really shifts her viewpoint, especially when Azula hurts and destroys her friend—someone who helped and cared for her.
Ty Lee has been surrounded by demons her entire life, but she never thought of Azule as a monster and never had any reason to fear or mistrust her. But now she does, with Suki being hurt, with Azula attempting to wipe her mind, and then with the discovery of how Azula turned her first real friend into a monster ...
Ty Lee is starting to question everything she ever knew and that scares her. And Azula is starting to see doubt in Ty Lee's eyes and that terrifies her. Their world is changing.
I imagine that it's going to get a lot worse before it gets better for them. Ty Lee is twelve, has started her period, and is beginning to enter the "rebellious" stage of adolescence. Azula is certainly going to struggle with dealing with the sudden loss of Ty Lee's unconditional affection and trust.
Azula needs Ty Lee's love and while I'm sure Ty Lee will always love her, I wouldn't be surprised if Ty Lee begins to feel anger and wven hatred towards Azula for what she did to Suki.
And if Ty Lee ever hates her, for even one moment, I think that would be truly devastating to Azula.
Anyway, this is a fantastic fic. Thank you so much for all you have written—I truly enjoyed every word—and I think it's introduced be to a new trope I like. I hope you continue this fic one day, but regardless, it was an absolutely fantastic read and I am grateful for all you have e posted of it and I'm going to enjoy imagining the possible endings and developments it entails.
Throw Me Far Away chapter 10 . 12/4/2017
i think what happened to suki was a turning point for ty lee's perspective. it may cause a drastic change in how she views azula and the demons that adopted her and more susceptible to hama's manipulation. especially with the failed brainwashing from the dai li.
she may or may not follow azula anymore, not without becoming in conflict with herself, human as she is. how she'll overcome that, i am very interested.
but i guess she wont stay human for long, now would she?

do you plan on continuing this? i hope you do. this is wonderful. thank you for your hard work.
Chenmao chapter 10 . 7/30/2016
Finally read the update! Awesome update as always! Thanks for the hard work!
Fykatherine chapter 10 . 7/12/2016
Why is ty lee not brain washed ? And I wonder what would Azula think about 18 year old ty lee.
electric gurrl chapter 10 . 7/11/2016
Awesome as always. I love this story.
redautumnhaze chapter 10 . 6/29/2016
Terrific chapter.
esauoy chapter 10 . 6/29/2016
what you did to suki ruined this fic for me and that ty lee still has no own opinion at her age seems so unrealistic she should hate azula for what she did to her and her friend
for example after azula tries to make her forget everything ty lee should not just accepted it after she found out what azula tried to do
ty lee still is the naive stupid girl h
Streetlight Eyes chapter 10 . 6/28/2016
Very good chapter.
sinking like stones chapter 10 . 6/28/2016
I thought this was a really good chapter. As weird as usual, of course.
Powder Gangers Go chapter 10 . 6/27/2016
Thank you for updating. Great chapter.
grither55 chapter 9 . 3/12/2016
I really love your story! I love the relationship between Ty Lee and Azula. There are many Tyzula stories, but this one is unique with the fire demon aspect and I like that. Please update with chapter 10 soon! This is a sweet story. I wonder how Azula will figure out the Hama thing. Again, love the detail and the supernatural world you made, it is awesome! Azula and Mai make great demon guardians too. It is a shame Ty Lee could not save Suki though.
KuroPringle chapter 9 . 3/12/2016
I love where the story's going! Looking forward to the next chapter. :D
BabydollEyelashes chapter 9 . 3/11/2016
Fantastic chapter!
American Zombie chapter 9 . 3/7/2016
Cool chapter.
electric gurrl chapter 9 . 3/7/2016
I loved this chapter.
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