please update

Please continue this it's hard to see rubyxwinter

Magnificent chapter can’t wait for more please update soon

Hey me again it’s great as well I like how agent hunter used the shield but.. you coulda made a cliche chase scene first then be a little meta with rwby saying hey I feel like I’ve seen this before but you didn’t just thought I’d leave it here for further reference

Its great! Amazing read however the “lemon scene” from earlier could’ve been a bit better but your doing great keep it up

Ei por que parou ?, Continua eu quero saber o que vai acontecer por favor continua

I am with Rebmul what are the future plans for this story?

Was a nice little read.

will we ever see a update for this

Im kinda surprised that you didn't have the other members of team rwby ask who "queen" I'm guessing you thought about putting that in but desided not to. No complaints this is every well written just hope that it continues after chapter 16.

Winter as a secret crime Lady is an even better concept after her canon reveal, so this is decent fun. I feel like you've definitely improved since you wrote this, though.

Hard to request but this story is great and I hope you can finish it off with a YANG!
-dodges anvil- what the, Nora!? Okay okay I get it, I thought it was pretty punny. -gets hit with a tomatoe- okay yep, love the story carry on, pretend I was never heeeereeee...
XoXo to the author and all!

I know I'm late with this, but is Arslan supposed to be a joke of Aslan from Narnia? Especially since she's a lion.

cool fanfic, interesting pairing

Could I have an image of Artemis Jade Hunter please.

It is a good story to read, and a really unexpected, but very good and interesting pairing, highly enjoyed reading it... sorry i prefer to read through before reviewing these and i thoroughly enjoyed reading it