Reviews for The war of the three brothers |
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fallenxxshadows chapter 2 . 6/6/2016 This seems interesting. Can't wait till the next chapter |
ArthurShade chapter 2 . 4/24/2016 Excellent story and nice idea for the sorting |
TheWordWarrior chapter 2 . 4/3/2016 This was an excellent read and I would waiting for more. Aside a few spelling mistakes everything was spot on. This story has a lot of potential. However there were a couple of things that I couldn't stomach. The eleven year olds were talking like adults which was rather strange. I would prefer you dumb down their conversation a little bit. Also, Harry's sorting took too long (half an hour) and the hat's decision to give him freedom to move around was kind of overboard. Unless you have a really good reason for that to happen. I will just have to wait and see. |
MasterOfDragonsGod chapter 2 . 1/10/2016 Nice chapter. |
MasterOfDragonsGod chapter 1 . 1/10/2016 Interesting |
nyura-vanko chapter 2 . 11/10/2015 ahahaha i love this already~! looking forward to more |
OrionB15 chapter 2 . 11/9/2015 Interesting story, love the opener! |
m.j.readings chapter 2 . 11/9/2015 what happened to lily? |
ThunderReborn chapter 1 . 9/13/2015 What happen to Lily? |
Guest chapter 1 . 9/2/2015 A very good chapter/update |
Forever Silent Girl chapter 1 . 8/24/2015 like it so far |
MadHatter1278 chapter 1 . 8/18/2015 This is SOOO good! |