Reviews for Grey
Axrael chapter 1 . 2/25/2019
You may not be in this website anymore but damn this is a good story. Heartwarming all the way. Kudos
LightningRivera chapter 1 . 10/14/2016
Aww this was so heartwarming. I love this so much.
Kaa chapter 1 . 4/13/2016
Percy having a son named Hector is just the best thing ever! I bet Athena was thrilled...
percythedarkone chapter 1 . 10/13/2015
Girl! Stop making me cry! You are one of the BEST fanfiction authors here on and I am so happy you are still writing. This oneshot made me realize the importance of aging and how it feels to be "old". My heart hurts. Thanks a lot. But no, really, I am so glad that you wrote this, you are better than some published authors. I swear. Check out my tumblr - percy-the-dark-one, I would love to hear more from you and I hope you will keep writing!
~Shivani
ObsessedwReading chapter 1 . 9/2/2015
Wonderfully written. :-)
X-Gon-Give-It chapter 1 . 8/20/2015
awww that was the sweetest, most adorable one-shot I've ever read! I love it so much! And i like how you came up with differnt names for the kids, and not naming them after other people from the books (it annoys me a lot). Really good job indeed.
yayforyou chapter 1 . 8/19/2015
Percy and Annabeth together after so many years and in love just like day one with a big loving family...just...*sheds a tear* anyway, this is great because it's incredibly meaningful while remaining light. It's sweet but not cloying. I like how they're still very much themselves yet growing old gracefully. The kids and grandkids are unique. My favorite part is Percy tells strangers about his family, that was adorable. I would have liked to see the seven or Percy and Annabeth s friends, perhaps. Great work you rock!
Midnightstar-and-Echosong chapter 1 . 8/19/2015
OMYGOODNESS that was ao adorable! I am so glad that I had it to read in the middle of the night when I was up sick. Because it was just perfect, so sweet, and it made me feel better about growing up. I mean this year Percy's 22 and Harry Potter's freaking 35! My heroes are growing up and I'm going to college in like five days, even though a part of me is still like college? WTH!? You are a child! You still have in-depth conversations about Percy Jackson and Harry Potter, you are not an adult! So yes, this made me feel better about it. Because even though we can't stay young forever we can grow old and be thankful for it, and we can be forever young at heart:)
So thank you, thank you, thank you for that. I adored it:) Percabeth really never does get old;)
~Midnight
Guest chapter 1 . 8/19/2015
This story is gorgeous. Gosh... My copy of the Greek Heroes is still on the post
McAwesome101 chapter 1 . 8/19/2015
So cute! HAPPY BIRTHDAY PERCY JACKSON!
carameltootsieroll chapter 1 . 8/19/2015
This was perfect this was perfect this was ABSOLUTELY PRAISE-OLYMPUS PERFECT! Dude, I'm so glad you came up with this amazing and truly touching one-shot. I pretty much am tired of the usual hbd Percy one-shots that narrate a date with Annabeth yadayadayaaaa, so this story was a refreshing breath of fresh air for me. Characterization was on point, narration was A plus, words and sentences flowed together so seamlessly. I love how you were able to subtly add all those background stories of what happened to Percy over the years in the first part of this story in such a way that I wasn't overwhelmed with info as a reader, and I was encouraged to read on. The scenes with the rest of his family was really heart-warming. I definitely loved this so much! I believe my review will never be sufficient enough to describe how much feeeeeels are burning through my veins at the moment because of this wonderful story! KEEP WRITING BC U ROCK!
LittleManY2K chapter 1 . 8/19/2015
Ever wonder if demigods live longer than mortals? I mean, they are half God, so in theory, they should live longer, right? I don't know, great story though. It was very nice!
KiraLiven chapter 1 . 8/19/2015
I swear you write the best one-shots (if not stories in general) for PJO like, ever, this one included. :) Happy birthday Percy Jackson! 3
Lol chapter 1 . 8/19/2015
I have no words to deceive my overload of feels right now
baby Cyclopes chapter 1 . 8/18/2015
This was great! :D