I loved this entire thing. It was so sweet and adorable and wonderful. Great job!

oh masumoto

Loved the chapter :D. I love Aiko, she's the perfect little sister for Toshiro. 'Same with Karin. Maybe you should make a chapter about them and the others having a huge snowball fight, or maybe watching fireworks? I can't remember if you've already done that or not so if you have then maybe you can do something using mistletoe. I don't know :P.
Anyways, I hope you have a great day and, as always, keep up to great work :D.
Ja ne!

great chapter so glad you updated

it was a lovely chapter. i really liked the paint war at the end - how Rukia and Karin acted like complete kids.
i really like your writing style - it's thoughtful. i don't know how to say it, but sometimes you can feel as if the author didn't really care about the thing they were writing about, but here i don't feel this, which is good.
maybe you could add some interactions between Aiko an her parents, cause so far we haven't seen much of that.
(for all grammar mistakes i apologize - enlish is not my first language)

I got so embarrased when I found out I posted 2 reviews, but I really didn't see it and I wanted to leave one...
Anyway, this chapter was cuute, and the part with getting sunburns was so real - pale people just can't leave home without sunscreen (I speak from experience). In the last part the paint war surpriesd me; I would've expected Aiko getting Shiro all in paint, but not Rukia and Karin throwing it ath each other. And I rarely get surprised so point for you.
Looking forward to the next chapter! :) Have a nice day/night.

awww ichigo

I loved the chapter. Also, I enjoyed seeing Karin stand up to Rukia.

New chapterrrr! I'm thinking of getting a FF account so I could see the updates the day they come out, not find out about them half of a month later. Great chapter, very sweet, I loved little sister/big brother interaction. Can't wait for the next part!

Aiko is so cute! *-* I love Toshiro n.n
This is so good, pliss continue!

I already reviewed this chapter but somehow my review wasn't sent. I don't know why, but well - once again - I adored this chapter! Aiko is sooo cute and Shiro is a great big brother! I especially loved the scene where Aiko threw mashed potato at him - hillarious!
I'm looking forward to next chapter! Have a nice day/night.

I've just read it! I should be sleeping right now but this is more interesting! The chapter was so cute and Aiko is a really adorable child! I especially liked the part when she was throwing sweet potato at Shiro.
Keep up the good work and have a nice day/night!

omg shes trying to get him killed by saying that.

I absolutly love your been Rangiku and Gin's son is an interesting theory and the way you are doing the story is great. The last chapter is so cute and I find really interesting the fact that Toshiro is jealous about Aiko having their parents raising her and not him. I would love to see more interaction between the four(Rangiku,Gin, Toshiro and Aiko) as a family

I'm so sorry for not comment this before! ToT
Hahaha, Ichigo get angry, a classic :D
I would liked to see more teenage hormones 7w7 But well... xD
Thanks you so much for this! Hope you updated soon *-*
Karin... what "others guys" you dated?
Cutie Toshiro is the best! ;)