I forgot to add, that people in Japan wouldn't think the term jutsu is weird. It means technique, and is actually used occasionally in the Japanese dub of Bleach. Its associated with martial arts in the real and anime worlds such as Bojutsu (fighting with a bo staff), jujitsu (unarmed combat) and kenjutsu (sword fighting).

And Naruto would be more likely to be made fun of because of his "dattebayo", than for people to try to find meaning in it. It's a verbal tick that many Japanese children have, adding extra syllables to the ends of their sentences when they are excited. Naruto's tick is longer than most, but it would be looked at as a sign of immaturity.

It doesnt really matter if you keep these as is in your fic since it is fiction. But I thought I would bring it up, as something of interest if nothing else.

Again, keep up the good work!

To be honest this is one of the better executed Bleach/Naruto crossovers I've read/sorted through. Its in the top 5, and ive gone through about half of the stories on here. There are hiccups here and there, but overall it is cute while having a good blend of both stories.

It is strange to me that Naruto, or at least Kurama wouldn't notice Rukia in the closet. It makes sense for the story flow to remain normal...but he was on hyper alert because of ghosts AND even when he was 12 his senses were good enough to notice genin ninja hiding, much less someone in the same room who isnt a ninja.

It is also weird that Rukia would not press Naruto for details about being able to level the city. Or a demon being sealed in him. Seems to me she would've been really freaked out and it should have qualified for a scene. Also, it's weird that he would admit to Kurama when he didnt even tell people in his world (who knew about tailed beasts) who were his friends, yes they found out but that was from other sources.

It was also strange how you changed Orehime's parents from being dead to being horrible people. Just curious if there was a reason for that, as unlike the necklace still being intact it was a change that threw me out of the flow. It just didnt quite sit right.

That being said Naruto and Ichigo's relationship is well executed, I enjoyed reading it.

Also if you want to go back to chapter 1 ever, a better explanation for Naruto struggling against the hollow might have been him not knowing how to kill it. He could've landed lethal blows multiple times, and been frustrated with how it kept coming back. What you wrote works, dont get me wrong. Just a thought, so it would be more evident in the story than Naruto wont be weak rather than having to leave an explanation in the author's note.

I realize you probably wont return to this fic, but if you ever do I hope you do the balance right. With Naruto and Ichigo, their vitality and energy has always been extremely similar in both series. However, with Kurama added into the picture, Naruto's vitality goes from
superhumanly massive to limitless. And with this being post Kagura, I dont really see him losing to anyone in Bleach without a nerf. So instead of a nerf, perhaps the route of "All Might" might be better. In My Hero Academia, All Might always wins when he shows up but he cant be there for every fight ya get me? So rather than nerf Naruto, split the screen time a bit so they each get their own fights.

Sorry for rambling on, I do hope to see more in the future. There is a lot of potential, and I like what I've seen so far!

P.S. I really hope you DONT do a harem. And my vote is always Yoruichixnaruto ;)

awesome chapter dude cant wait to read more!

Another good story! You have a talent my friend.

Read ya later!

This is great! Please keep writing it if you can! I'm not 100% sure I like how Naruto just revealed his past in it's entirety rather than only letting them know a bit about him, but overall it's a great story and you're depicting the characters very well with excellent dialogue. Keep up the good work!

that was good keep the chapters coming

this is awesome i wish you would do more
10/10

I can't get enough.

Golden!

Don't ever changed!

I love it. You need to updated soon
And please don't abandone this story

great story really enjoyed myself reallyvhope you continue it

i loved this story its good, i am digging it that you are slowly building up the shouldn't Naruto be able to sense the cat and anybody else spying or hiding from when rukia brother comes can you have Naruto show a little bit of badassness to him but not showing allot of will naruto have a harem if so will it be medium, big or large. also will he be having a relationship with his boss.

I am liking this story good job

Good stuff you have here i really hope that you post another chapter soon of this fic and the avatar x naruto one.