Reviews for Pokemon Ash is Betrayed
Poke-ranger21 chapter 3 . 12/5/2018
love it, please update because I think this story will be very good!
Human Not chapter 3 . 6/13/2018
It is good so far
Pokehero115 chapter 3 . 1/26/2018
I hope you come up with something
Guest chapter 2 . 6/23/2017
this kisnt the best thing ive read but isnt thd worst. need to work on that rigting style.
SaiyanChamp chapter 2 . 5/31/2017
very good. update pls
Guest chapter 2 . 5/16/2017
This is bad
twly chapter 2 . 4/28/2017
F U C K
Guest chapter 2 . 4/13/2017
Please update
Guest chapter 2 . 4/4/2017
Please continue. This story is really good.
Guest chapter 2 . 2/16/2017
Misty
Emperor-Aurora chapter 1 . 1/24/2017
Written WAY too much like a script, try again idiot.
Clayttr chapter 2 . 1/16/2017
Instead of try me b*tch, try me arceus.
Great story, please update
Guest chapter 1 . 12/26/2016
No lemons
Guest chapter 2 . 12/26/2016
This is to rushed and ash reveals himself early in the story needs a lot of adjustments you have potential though
Day loves music j chapter 2 . 12/26/2016
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