I loved the writing and the organization of the story. Very well written. Great grammar. Easy to read. Constantly kept me interested. It was as if I was watching an actual episode of RWBY. Nobody was out of character and the jokes were spot on.

I loved it so much

Beautiful.

This was brilliant. I've been a fan of Emerald and Cinder as a pairing, for a while now. I was looking for a good fanfic that had these two get together, and I definitely found one. It was a bit strange to see Roman's good side, but I know it exists, and I do feel like this was still very much in his character, but just a different side of him we didn't see in the show. Overall, it was very well done.

Beautiful.

And fans love fanfics

Woooooo! Nice work Roman! Always being one of the best characters in the series!

That was amazing! No one was ooc in my opinion. Thanks for the amazing read!

More! More!

Bravo