When are you going to update?! This is a great story! Update, plleeeaaasseee! I love it so far!

I don't care how bad the others chapters were, put something back up! My very soul is in wrenching pain, literally! It physically hurts, I've been crying for a very long time and this abrupt end that has been here for about 11 years, is causing a lot if people, including me, to question why such a good story could cause so much emotional worry from not being updated. Please bring it back, be one of the cool writers that come back after so long!

You are so mean I mean really you could at least put dicontinued

If you're not gonna update, then can you at least tell me what happens later on?

I love the story and it looks like you never did rewrite it this is a really good story and i'd like to know what happened, if you still have the chapters you got rid of you should repost them so i at least know what Vegeta did to his father pleeeeeaaasssee it's a really good story )

This is a brilliant story...I'm so sad it wasn't finished...

I wonder, did you break your promise and stopped working on this? I've been waiting for 6 years, I'm removing this story and giving up. Really, I believed in what you said, I loved this story and especially your passion for writing. People rarely realize anymore that writing is a true piece of art.

Sadly I never learn and put my heart into reading unfinished stories that won't ever be completed again and again and again. People like you make me not read WIPs or trust authors at all anymore. I really can't understand why you wouldn't just notify us that you've stopped working on this, no problem at all, but instead leave us hanging with empty promises.

WHAT! i was reading this this story and when i went to go to the next chapter it wasnt there, gurl u really need to not do that ever again I think this is a great story so far so i say please HURRY UP!

hey

how are you?

i was wondering how fare you are with the story...

maby you should post the next chapter

i micht take REALY long to finish the story.

i have red story's from 80 chaps that started out as a one-shot!

and i realy want to know what happens next

gr. Shadow

Wow, good stuff! Quite the good story! Poor Vegeta! But hey, a story about split personalities, can't go wrong there!

Wow, this is looking to be pretty good. I'd really like to read the rest of it, so post the others when you can. Please? Great, now I have to go check out your other stories if they're as good as this one so far.

My gosh, lol, I could just kick myself for not reading the rest of your stories...and I've had you on my favorites list for a LONG time!

Darn it, anyway, this is going into my mentally organized top twenty list of some of the best fanfics ever written, and this includes some of my favorite categories. This is truly wonderfully written. It reminds me of Gollum/Smeagol from Lord of the Rings (Incidentally, did you get your inspiration from that?).

I know exactly how you feel-I tend to feel pressured when asked to update quickly. Heh, ironic, no pressure, but try not to take 2 years to update! ;) I've read some good fics that were on hiatus or not updated for 2 years! Makes me wanna pull my hair out.

Anyway, excellent work. I don't know what else to say. This is a great piece of work. Can't wait to see the BV interaction as well as what those little voices say next and to what the final outcome of this story will be.

Good job. D

PS: I'm "highly recommending" this story!

Well this is news! I'm happy that you're getting underway making the story fantastic, though. I'm not mad... surprisingly! Just make it good, and I think I can forgive you. Haha, I'm just playing... I can't WAIT to see what you do with this, believe me! I'll be anxiously waiting...

Hey Stef-chan!

I wish you lots of luck in your revision process! I think it's very good that you'll still try to improve your stories.

I'm looking forward to the outcome.

~ Maz

omg stef! when is the next chapter finally going to show itself? please hurry! i have to know what's going to happen! and i know your having some problems and im sorry about them but i really need to know whats going to happen! i love this fic! hurry!