Oh nooo why does it end there?! :D

This was beautiful! Very well written.

I think u got the characters right worthfull! I think u write both tonks and Sirius well and they are my favorite characters. Remus also :-)

You know a story is beautiful when I'm OK with Remus not being with Hermione! That was lovely!

The story is good, but since it has the copied lyrics of "Trouble Me" by 10000 Maniacs, it breaks the following part of the Content Guidelines:

Actions not allowed:
3. Copying from a previously published work (including musical lyrics) not in the public domain.

Please remove all of the copied lyrics from your story before someone can use them as evidence in their abuse reports.

And in case you're wondering when and why that rule is made, here is the background information. Back on April 27, 2005, the admins put this message on the front page regarding songfics:

In addition, [this site] would like to address a growing problem. For whatever reason, some writers feel it's okay to copy-n-paste musical lyrics they have not written into their fiction. If you did not write it, do not post it. This has always been our policy. Please remove these entries immediately to avoid account closure.

Keep in mind that "public domain" means something that has expired intellectual properties, like Shakespearean works. And disclaimers don't cut it for song lyrics. Not even changing a few words from the original song will be enough.

That was beautiful. Slow and meaningful, full of emotion, and so well written. I could see them very clearly, finally getting to enjoy each other on the night of their wedding. I loved it. Enough that I can forgive you sticking to canon and keeping Sirius dead... hehe. ;)

Beautiful, nicely done!

Love it