Now that I think about it, I do hope you dont try and use some space magic to bring their parents back and/or *especially* send them back to their home. Because otherwise, after the Eds and Link return from 7 years of sleep, the appearance of the other kids, the destruction of their home, and the deaths of their parents would be nothing but shock value and just a way to get the other kids into the story. Plus, lets face it, then the Eds, along with their cul-de-sac friends, remain in Hyrule to fight alongside Link and Navi when ever danger rises again.

P.S~ As a personal opinion, Double D should have got a Rapier sword (Sid Meier's Pirates) rather than the Shortsword.

Awww, this was the perfect opportunity for character development for Double D. Leave the scars on his face to leave as a reminder that he failed to defend himself cuz he was abnormally weak. Would have been cool.

Uh, why did they need to rush towards the gates when they had well over another hour til he came? I mean I understand the urgency of needing to be their but still.

The son of a shepherd returns! And more importantly you released another chapter. This is great, a chapter that brings us joy as Link and the Ed’s are further in their journey. You’re doing great with this. I wonder what will happen next? They should be journeying to the first and haunted ruins next. I can imagine Ed charging in head first with excitement at seeing ghosts. Or would that be aliens?

We need some fanart of Double D and Ruto.

this makes me happy to see this story isn't dead. only a few grammatical errors but it doesn't detract from how good the story is. ill be waiting patiently for the next chapter.

keep up the great work!
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zane wintercall

Great story so far. Especially since I've been playing through the Master Quest on 3DS

Ah Ingo is like the typical Capitalist American that throws a tantrum when they lose. Or some 8 year old on the internet losing an argument to someone else, losing on C.O.D, etc.

Pretty fun chapter! A new ally joins, and our 4 heroes have taken another step in saving the world. Honestly I never played ocarina of time, but from what I can gather, this is 100 percent faithful to the source and just a joyous read

TAY NEW CHAPTER

I needed this so bad~

It has been a while since I've last seen a chapter of this story.

Ingo's greed ended up being his downfall, but it was sort of also the fault of Malon and Talon that he acted that way. Ganondorf merely catered to the weakness of Ingo's heart.

With Lon Lon Ranch taken care of, it's off to the Forest Temple. It'll be a doozy, especially with what happened to Kokori Village. Take your time on it. Mm'kay? I'll see you next chapter.

Good to see another chapter of this fic, I love the way you weave these worlds together. Looking forward to seeing more. Just surprised that Rolf went down to one whip strike instead of striking back...well, that's a minor gripe. Take care.

Rolf would make Ingo his working nincompoop no doubt, I bet Ed would do another annoying song like Koda from Brother Bear

I recall this story! Good to see it continue. Adventure! :D