Reviews for A Beautiful Lie |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hi. I love your history and I am anxiously waiting for the rest. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi... I just want to say that I love your history and I am waiting |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can't wait to read the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is soo good! I love the suspense in it, and it’s super entertaining to read. I’m really glad I stumbled across this fic! Can’t wait to see where this goes! Keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() AHHHHHHHHHH YOU UPDATED OH MY GOODNESS! I was so worried you'd given up but I'm so glad you didn't! Please keep going with all your might! I hope you and your family are doing well with everything that's going on! Okay! So omg I love Wally and Kuki's relationship so much. The way you've written him just keeps me wanting to see more, like what happened to him, how did he get like this! He clearly remembers his relationship with Kuki so what did he go through to change everything! I wonder what kind of abuse he went through with Father. This is all so interesting to me! Please keep it up! AND FINALLY NIGEL IS BACK! I can't wait to see what the next chapter is going to bring! What's going to happen with the rest of the KND and the other characters AH I'm excited! Also ooo what's the ring do! lol he liked it so he put a ring on it haha! Good job Wally! Okay I'll see you soon! Keep up the good work! And thank you for another chapter to this fabulous story! Thanks, Yoyo |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fantastic writing: ) |
![]() ![]() So happy to see you upload! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey! You're back! Ooooh this chapter was intense! Thankyou Please keep it up! X |
![]() ![]() ![]() Holy moly an update lol but none the less this chapter was awesome. Can’t wait to see even more chemistry between numbuh 3&4. I’m looking forward to more updates, hopefully they won’t be so long a wait. |
![]() ![]() ![]() And my heart went over the moon. Thank you for uploading! As mentioned above, you have captured the characters so well. I am wondering what would happen if Wally gets jealous. . |
![]() ![]() ![]() Uhg... bro... this fic is so dang good. Like it's worth the wait. It's really one of the best fics I've ever read, I'm able to hang on every word and the mystery is so compelling... The way you're able to keep Kukis personality while also showing that she's matured is incredible. Not to mention the way you handle the emotions is so good and believable. Each scene transition so well into eachother and the style of writing is so attractive! Your characterization of Wally is impeccable too! The way you're able to subtly show his hidden humanity while keeping his mask so well in place is very impressive! I am so excited to see the continuation and conclusion of this story. Keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have been following this story since the beginning. Pleeeease keep writing and update more frequently this is still my favorite story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi! This is such a lovely fic, I hope to see you update again soon! It’s so interesting to see Wally on Father’s side, and the dynamics between him and Kuki. I really like the plot and the characterization of all the characters. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is such a good book. Is it being updated? |
![]() ![]() Hi! So it's been officially a year since your last update. I hope you're still planning to continue the story . I would hate to lose this masterpiece. It's so interesting so far and I would love to find out what happens! I understand that breaks are necessary, so I don't wanna push you too hard; but it has been a year, so hopefully an update is still on the way! Hopefully you'll update soon! Thanks, Yoyo |