Great story!

Dialogue is topnotch. Fun, organic and lifelike, props to you.

Interactions are well thought of and amazingly executed.

Descriptions are really well done, giving information enough to get what's needed across but not overwhelm the reader.

Depth and characterization are increasingly complex but they happen in a manner that feels natural and that makes it easy to understand for us readers. The characters also don't feel OOC in the context, situations and circumstances going on around them.

The Fight scene is awesome and really fluid, almost seems taken straight out of an anime. Loved it.

Ortography, grammar and punctuation are spot on.

Lines, paragraphs and each of their own structures in comparison to the story are well written, especially so for a story more focused on fast interactions and full of dialogues.

It's been a long time since I've read one of your stories. This one just reminded me why you were one of my favorite authors when I was bigger on the Naruto fandom.

The rating for this one is at least 9,5 out of 10.

Keep up the good work and I hope to read more from you soon.

Ah, the thing I loathe much. Apostrophes instead of speech marks, and speech marks instead of apostrophes.

Are you ever going to update this one?

Man I just found this story and it's awesome! I would love for a new chapter, but I understand that you probably have a lot on your plate right now. So if you eventually update this I'll definitely read it!

This has been really good! Poor Anko though lol. Hope to seen an update soon.

Anko is going to be so humiliated.

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Amazing story so far, can’t wait to read more chapters

I. Am. Hooked! More Naruto/Tayuya is needed in the world.

This is amazing keep it going

I've been putting off reading this story for a while, and am I glad I gave it a read.

This is a really interesting take on Naruto, not often is Genjutsu/illusion Naruto done, and you have done an amazing job so far.

Making Naruto akin to Aizen is an interesting take, underneath his facade of the fool, he's calm, collected, deceptive and manipulative... But at this point he's not coming off as evil, He even has quite the sarcastic playful side, especially where Tayuya is concerned.

But I get the feeling that everyone is going to see the real Naruto sooner than he plans, as time isn't on his side, 4-5 years is all he has realistically before the world goes to hell in a handbasket thanks to Akatsuki and Madara.

On a side note, poor Anko, She wont be able to live that one down once she finds out shes been tricked this badly.

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Lol nice

oye puedes actualizar el fic de "A Third Chance" por favor.

oye puedes actualizar el fic de "A Third Chance"?