is ana glinda's subconcious perhaps?
no one sees her
she's the 'negative' personna
idk

A Very interesting start to the story. I would recommend to people who have seen Wicked or want a good read

An amazing ending. I'm so sad it's over, but I'm looking forward to seeing what you'll be writing next!

Wow. It's been an incredible journey, hasn't it? I really want to thank you for being brave enough to draw attention to such a sensitive issue. Congratulations again on your Greg Awards! You deserved them!
I'm sad to see this end, but I look forward to your next fic!

It's over. Yeesh. It's been an incredible journey and I'm very honoured that I got to proof-read all of it before it got published! You've truly improved a lot as a writer over time and I'm proud of you. :)

This final chapter was a great ending to a great story. The entire fic has been so bittersweet, including the ending, which I think is very well done because it's how these things are in real life. There is no happy ending. Not always. There's just an ending, and that in itself is something special. The whole thing was realistic just because it wasn't all happy rainbows and sunshine. That's not how it goes.

This was very well done. I'll miss proof-reading this story, but I'm glad I was there for all of it and I'm looking forward to your next story!

Ahh, the conflicting emotions... Happy there was an update, sad that it's over. The ending itself was both happy and sad — but it wrapped things up nicely, it fit it into the Wicked universe. If it had to end, it was a good one. This one will definitely stay as one of my favorite fanfictions.

A great ending to a great story. I think it all wrapped up pretty nicely. Great job!

SUCH a brilliant ending! You couldn't have drawn it to a better conclusion if I'm honest. Well done on an amazing and hard hitting series, I can't wait for any new stories in the future! X

This was beautifully written! I really enjoyed it!

I know you got some criticism on this chapter, but I thought it was brilliant. An interesting situation, with Fiyero going with Elphie, and Boq staying with Glinda. I liked that you included the part of the story line with the Animals. Short, but fantastic as always. I can't wait for the next chapter, but part of me can because I don't want it to end!

You're killing me. Elphaba left... :/
I hope Boq is enough to help her, and Elphaba leaving doesn't push her back to the beginning.
Great chapter!

This chapter was so heartbreaking and sad! Can't wait to see what happens next.

Ok. So. I've been following this story as it's been progressing. Generally I would say it's progressing very well and contains some originality that has kept me longing for the next chapter. So well done for that.

But why, oh WHY did you have to end this chapter with a horrendous cliche? :(

This has been done so many times, when an author has just cut off the plot by throwing in Elphie's sudden departure and then ending the story.

You're better than that. Your last twelve chapters are better than that.

Also, Elphie wouldn't abandon Galinda in this sort of a situation. I know she dropped everything for the Animals, but she's not completely heartless or insane - if her best friend was on the brink of dying, there is no way Elphie would leave.

Now, I don't normally leave such harsh criticism, but the reason why I did is because I see potential in your writing. This is the writing of someone who has a talent worth bothering about, and the best way to improve is through receiving constructive critique. I hope this helps even if it seems harsh.

Keep writing. :)

~heatqueen

This chapter was heartbreaking and lovely. I love the idea of Glinda and Boq getting together this way. I also loved the Elphaba flashback, it brings the story a whole bittersweet edge. Great job!

I love this