Reviews for Acidic Lipstick |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Perfect. I liked the writing style, I liked their interactions, and I loved that he made her come back to him. To me it would have been a well rounded story without the part about Kevin. Many stories portray him as vindictive, but I just never could see it. I think of him as too dumb (apart from tech skills) for that. But I guess he could have this little weasel quality about him. Anyway, since you added that, I’d gladly read a sequel. If it’s anything like this one it’s be more than good |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMGGGGGG. I did not see that ending coming. OOOooo the sequal is going to be BOMB. Lol but Awww Penelope! "I Love you Derek ...It has always been you" 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well that was a pretty heated argument lol. Nice work here! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh man that ending was beautiful! Cannot wait for the sequel! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please keep going I'll look for more soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() ok I kinda feel bad for kevin its gotta suck to be dumped the morning after your wedding but I really wish he would just piss off but I got a feeling he is going to cause much much trouble damn ol lynch ;) hurray for Penelope and derek finally getting it right! |
![]() ![]() ![]() There has to be a sequel. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh how you TEASE! Can't wait for the sequel! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() For now, something tells me that we are going to be getting a sequel and I sooooo can't wait |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ohhhhhhh that was good and wow please hurry with the update. Hmmm i wonder what is Kevin gonna do lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! I'm so happy Penelope cam to her senses and is wanting to be with Derek now. I can't wait to see what you have planned for this story! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!C: |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, I can see Kevin being upset about the situation. To go as far at telling off Penelope and Derek, but to seek revenge is ascending Dow a path to the rabbit-hole. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well Kevin will be making an attempt to steal back Penelope I bet. But it won't work ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() You should rename this Two Morons and a Psychopath. Don't nobody wanna be married to Lynch especially if your best friend looks like he could knock your spine out of alignment. To graphic? lol I love this story I'm always sad to read a good story ending but I literally can't wait to see where the sequel goes. |
![]() ![]() LOVED IT ! MORE PLEASE ! |