Reviews for Acidic Lipstick
Calyptra chapter 5 . 3/15/2018
Perfect. I liked the writing style, I liked their interactions, and I loved that he made her come back to him. To me it would have been a well rounded story without the part about Kevin.
Many stories portray him as vindictive, but I just never could see it. I think of him as too dumb (apart from tech skills) for that. But I guess he could have this little weasel quality about him.
Anyway, since you added that, I’d gladly read a sequel. If it’s anything like this one it’s be more than good
fanfiction91 chapter 5 . 5/3/2016
OMGGGGGG. I did not see that ending coming. OOOooo the sequal is going to be BOMB. Lol but Awww Penelope! "I Love you Derek ...It has always been you" 3
fanfiction91 chapter 4 . 5/3/2016
Well that was a pretty heated argument lol. Nice work here!
rockerbugs chapter 5 . 1/28/2016
Oh man that ending was beautiful! Cannot wait for the sequel!
aplb2010 chapter 5 . 1/27/2016
Please keep going I'll look for more soon
went chapter 5 . 1/27/2016
ok I kinda feel bad for kevin its gotta suck to be dumped the morning after your wedding but I really wish he would just piss off but I got a feeling he is going to cause much much trouble damn ol lynch ;)

hurray for Penelope and derek finally getting it right!
Kimd33 chapter 5 . 1/27/2016
There has to be a sequel.
dellaslovinlife chapter 5 . 1/27/2016
Oh how you TEASE! Can't wait for the sequel! :D
jenny crum chapter 5 . 1/27/2016
For now, something tells me that we are going to be getting a sequel and I sooooo can't wait
snoochie76 chapter 5 . 1/27/2016
Ohhhhhhh that was good and wow please hurry with the update. Hmmm i wonder what is Kevin gonna do lol
autumn1999 chapter 5 . 1/27/2016
Yay! I'm so happy Penelope cam to her senses and is wanting to be with Derek now. I can't wait to see what you have planned for this story! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!C:
ReadtoRelax chapter 5 . 1/27/2016
Wow, I can see Kevin being upset about the situation. To go as far at telling off Penelope and Derek, but to seek revenge is ascending Dow a path to the rabbit-hole.
elphiemolizbethbau chapter 5 . 1/27/2016
Well Kevin will be making an attempt to steal back Penelope I bet. But it won't work ;)
CeeCee333 chapter 5 . 1/27/2016
You should rename this Two Morons and a Psychopath. Don't nobody wanna be married to Lynch especially if your best friend looks like he could knock your spine out of alignment. To graphic? lol I love this story I'm always sad to read a good story ending but I literally can't wait to see where the sequel goes.
tudee chapter 5 . 1/27/2016
LOVED IT ! MORE PLEASE !
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