Gah! I love watching Vegeta falling in love through your lens

nice

The prose was moving and complex. You are clearly well peacticed and experienced.

There's no words to describe how perfect your characterization is. I'm just really amazed.

"Keep my good will to yourself, bitch."

"Your secret's safe with me, asshole."

Haha. Vegeta and I love Bulma for the same reasons; can't out-sass the queen.

Love it! I love the way you portrait Bulma, not a defenceless damsel, but fierce and self reliant. I would love to see a story in which she is the hero and Vegeta is like I told you so to the others!

Loved this. Really, really beautiful

Stares at you. You're such a genius to write this. I love the banter. The flying wit all around. Such a focused story. Will there be an update soon?

I love this. I feel like I'm really in vegitas head. The way he preseves Bulma, I think you are spot on. His blood thirsty, war loving personality would find those similar qualities in a partner to be endearing I think. Great job!

I loved this. It was especially nice to read a story from his point of view.

Very beautiful.

Excellent! Really IC look into vegetas mind. :)

That is beautiful writing, thank you

Wow, this is really good so far. Well written and gives a lot of insight on the characters. Great first chapter I look forward to more.

I loved this! Love the interaction, the teasing, and the admiration he has for her without ever saying it.